Quick Drop

[Slim Zaddy]

elevation is key to the revelationz I speak,
celebrationz with heat,
torso'z found with they legz adjacent on streets,
ya head is vacant in sheets...with duct tape surroundin' ya liver,
crushed grapes were found on ya gizzerd,
take ya body...cut shapes and leave you found in a river,
my mindstate is underground...where it rightfully liez,
I'll slice you with knivez...rip out ya iris so I can try to look at life through ya eyez,
ya dead...I don't need no more of ya cooperation,
I slice ya corpse open like a coroner performin' operationz,
I'll store ya body in a basement,
where dead bodies wreak morbidly till I can taste it,
take you down to my lab...and take off all ya clothes when you enter,
if ya let me hang you from a meathook then I can have you over for dinner,
I'ma bless ya body...with multiple seasoningz,
and throw a festive party...without no reasoning,
to tenderize ya meat...I'ma have you beat with a stick,
if you were still alive...you could now brag about my girlfriend eatin' ya dick,

[slimsoxshady]

i'm not really a fan of this subject matter...but i can't deny the skill either...that was some pretty crazy rhyming, keep doin ya thing

"if ya let me hang you from a meathook then I can have you over for dinner"

[Ka0t1c]

that was sick in two different ways...umm, interesting, written pretty good 8/10

the best written part was: ..."adjacent on streets,
ya head is vacant in sheets...with duct tape surroundin' ya liver,
crushed grapes were found on ya gizzerd,
take ya body...cut shapes and leave you found in a river"

[gutawafang]

Nice. I like it z em. It's full of multis and i don't mind the subject at all. It's a good example for me to look up to.

[Slim Zaddy]

i'm not really a fan of this subject matter...but i can't deny the skill either...that was some pretty crazy rhyming, keep doin ya thing

"if ya let me hang you from a meathook then I can have you over for dinner"

thanks man for you honesty ,, i'm glad that you liked it bro ..

that was sick in two different ways...umm, interesting, written pretty good 8/10

the best written part was: ..."adjacent on streets,
ya head is vacant in sheets...with duct tape surroundin' ya liver,
crushed grapes were found on ya gizzerd,
take ya body...cut shapes and leave you found in a river"

yo Kaotic . thanks bro .. really appreciated,,
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Nice. I like it z em. It's full of multis and i don't mind the subject at all. It's a good example for me to look up to.

thanks man ,, glad that you liked it .. much appreciated man

[Slim Zaddy]

I liked the multi's and how raw it was, no critique here but still a sweet drop man keep droppin on the reg

thanks

[neversnooze]

when i read this im like did Z write this, the style is so different from your usual but it was good for a quick drop. i liked the part with iris to see through my eyes that was pretty cool comparison

[Slim Zaddy]

when i read this im like did Z write this, the style is so different from your usual but it was good for a quick drop. i liked the part with iris to see through my eyes that was pretty cool comparison

hahahha man ,, yup .. i'm trying here to write on different style .. and it was on rush ,, i did it maybe in 10 or 12 min, .. thanks man .. much appreciated bro ..

[James R.]

Well that was disturbing. Very different from what you normally post, but it was still good. The flow was there even though the structure wasn't so much. The lines were so different in length you almost had to ignore them to catch the flow, but once I caught it I found it very easy to stay on. The lyrics were good, vocab was nice, multies were tight. Mechanically this thing was very well oiled. What I didn't like was mainly the structure and some drop offs of flow. Also I wasn't feeling the content necessarily, but I did enjoy it. Just not my favorite thing to hear if you know what I mean? Dope though man. You're not disappointing anyone with this drop in my eyes.

[Slim Zaddy]

Well that was disturbing. Very different from what you normally post, but it was still good. The flow was there even though the structure wasn't so much. The lines were so different in length you almost had to ignore them to catch the flow, but once I caught it I found it very easy to stay on. The lyrics were good, vocab was nice, multies were tight. Mechanically this thing was very well oiled. What I didn't like was mainly the structure and some drop offs of flow. Also I wasn't feeling the content necessarily, but I did enjoy it. Just not my favorite thing to hear if you know what I mean? Dope though man. You're not disappointing anyone with this drop in my eyes.

thanks James .. . and this is not meant to leave an impact ,, it's just like i just wanna drop something ,, ,

[Solace]

It was okay, i was enjoying those nice multies and your vocabulary. The structure was bad but I could keep with the flow. The only thing that truly bothered me was reading the "z" lol (eg. liez). Keep it up dude, your doing well

[Slim Zaddy]

It was okay, i was enjoying those nice multies and your vocabulary. The structure was bad but I could keep with the flow. The only thing that truly bothered me was reading the "z" lol (eg. liez). Keep it up dude, your doing well

thanks man