NEW - All Or Nothing (Feat. MC Anonymous)

Website · by **Solace** » Feb 9th, '09, 02:04

[Epiphany]
Perseverance, application, I've gotten dedication,
Impatience ate at my heart, temptations to break shit,
I was breaking, broken relations, life? Well I hate it,
But I come back each time I fail, instead of just waiting,
I've gotten this far, man why would I quit now,
I gotta spit now, rip tracks now, and just hit crowds,
School? Fuck that shit, my homework is rhyming,
Going line by line, and if it's shit, I keep trying,
People try to keep me down, but it's only a delay,
Leave these people behind, and let them reach decay,
Cruel words, nonacceptance, it's all as old as time,
I've got a frozen mind, ready to blow some spines,
So face it, I ain't quitting till the day that I drop dead,
I'm in it for success, I ain't gonna stop, I'll not rest.
So face it, I ain't quitting till the day that I drop dead,
I'm in it for success, I ain't gunna stop, I'll not rest.

[Chorus x2]
It's all or nothing, and don't think I'm just bluffing,
It'll be stunning, cunning, no way you can touch me,
Sometimes actions can speak louder than words,
Well I'm gunna speak louder than you have ever heard.

[MC Anonymous]
Barefoot walking on the pavement, burning desire
wrap my hands around fate, and start turning the tires
blood, sweat, dripping from my neck, driving away
grace the beat, blood spills silently, trying to pay
for the sins I have made, yet my lungs are tied
breathe in air, and breathe out what I'm trying to hide
eyes slip, knives rip, my vocal cords are slashed
and when I exposed myself to earth, my borders crashed
now I'm infected with a rash, blood is boiling my skin
poisoned with the rag of uncertainty, dry within.

by **Emadyville** » Feb 9th, '09, 02:07

I thought both verses were equally good, I liked this cause it had a different feel with using a lot of one word shit, not like full lines of text, hook was good too. :y:

by **MC Anonymous** » Feb 9th, '09, 02:10

Thanks dude :y:

Website · by **Solace** » Feb 9th, '09, 02:12

Emadyville wrote:I thought both verses were equally good, I liked this cause it had a different feel with using a lot of one word shit, not like full lines of text, hook was good too.

Yeah thanks man :happy:

by **Requiem** » Feb 9th, '09, 02:12

i liked the emotion in verse one, but the flow was kind of wierd. i don't know, that 3rd line in verse one, was kind of akward :sweating:

like how u picked it up with the frozen mind line tho. :smoking:

chorus was great. i really liked it.
Mc's verse was short but good. it started out awesome with that burning desire line. the middle was kinda meh. but the dry within line was cool way to finish :y:

overall 7/10. not bad :happy:

Website · by **Solace** » Feb 9th, '09, 02:14

Ice Killa wrote:i liked the emotion in verse one, but the flow was kind of wierd. i don't know, that 3rd line in verse one, was kind of akward like how u picked it up with the frozen mind line tho.
chorus was great. i really liked it.
Mc's verse was short but good. it started out awesome with that burning desire line. the middle was kinda meh. but the dry within line was cool way to finish

overall 7/10. not bad

Thanks Ice :flower:

by **Slim Zaddy** » Feb 9th, '09, 11:53

well it's good , both verses are good , lyrics and rhymes in both are great , flow was there but i liked the emotions in the 1st verse,, MC verse was also good ,, nice collab ,, gd job here :y: