Yeehaw!

[Ka0t1c]

some gave me a hand creatin this crazy angle i stand
but to untangle my plan, i cannot make it single handedly
so here i am, not taking for granted, my greatest of fans
TRshady has landed me to claim on the planet, rather than fade in the sand

no way i'd abandon my family, we remain a big clan naturally
i will stay til the end, and by my name you'll remember me
always i have been sponataneous, Uncle Sam may never limit me
understand it or disagree, yet my aiming's more grand

to escape out that infantry called the eighty second, man
i say it's a mystery, now my pain has all fled as i'm gaining back tread
to explain how my training has given me a change to what's said
things are strange, yet bewildering statements have led me to a better energy

you'll witness me, Kaotic, expand, letting my imagery pave a new brand
living free, maintaining my dam building for the haters who'll jam
diliberately, my placement: examinations to scam those witnessing
the foundation i plant, their trickery, i'll face it well amped, leaving foes surrendering

[gutawafang]

totally.i was stunned for a second when you said you'll witness me, Kaotic, expand, letting my imagery pave a new brand. though it's not multi, and i don't get the flow, it's damn cool shit man.

[Ka0t1c]

Poetic as HELL. This was a deep piece. Since we're on the breaking down feedback, here is mine:

Lyrics: 9/10. I love how deep and entrancing your work here is.
Content: 10/10 This almost never lacks with you.
Flow: 8/10 Wasn't as consistent as it could have been, but pretty good none the less.
Structure: 9/10 As usual very stable and readable.

WOW! that's a great review and very respectable, i can't even argue with you here, it seems that you're opinion is right on the money, thank you for taking the time to check this piece out!

[Ka0t1c]

totally.i was stunned for a second when you said you'll witness me, Kaotic, expand, letting my imagery pave a new brand. though it's not multi, and i don't get the flow, it's damn cool shit man.

well, for the flow i use "witness me", "imagery", also "expand" & "brand" and use that sort of pattern

thanx for reading it, i'm glad u pointed that part out

[Slim Zaddy]

well i'm break my feed as McMaybe,, but first this one is deep man ,, i really loved it ..


Lyrics: they were will chosen , and they fit in what you are writing , and it's deep in emotions

Content: is dope ,,

Flow: at the first lines flow was great , but then at some parts it's on and off .. but i still can flow with it ,,

Structure: it looks great ,, thoughts and ideas are arranged ,, and that's very important in writing and you did'nt miss that ... overall it's 9/10 track ,, keep writing kaotic .. gd job

[Arabian Shady]

thats some deep thoughtfull shit right here man, i liked this, flowed nicely throughout the drop and lyrics were very well written, structure was okay tho.
nice drop B
Peace

[James R.]

This almost sounded like one of those Slam Poems that I love so much. I fucking love this man. The lyrics were on POINT. The flow was down, the structure was down, the rhyme scheme kept it fresh, the content was there as always. If you didn't have a high standard before you have one now. Good luck with that lol. Seriously though man, damn good job. I had to read it 3 times just to make sure I got everything down and it read perfect every. single. time.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx James, especially for reading it 3 times before u gave ur review, i appreciate your feed on mine and everyone else's pieces

[Solace]

Dude as everyone else said I liked it a lot! Didn't really understand the title tho haha, but it was good. Keep dropping this stuff

[mcZu]

This kinda reminded me of Def Jam, and I love those poems. I enjoyed reading each line, flow was almost perfect, but then again I don't know how you will deliver this. Rhymes were great, lyrics were poetic and good. Overall I enjoyed reading it, keep dropping lyrics off this caliber bro

[Ka0t1c]

thanx all, i had to leave to help with training but now im back, no cpu tho