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Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 13th, '09, 21:23

Lyrically, my energy converts gravity into accapella mastery
rhythm induced tragedy, and it's so sad to see me splatter G's
attacking these MC's, direct your attention to this worded verse
get pissed and rip this shit with spit, you bitch, I'm a real curse
Lethal spurts, cripple with unthinkable nuclear missiles and pistols
rip through your tissues with ninjitsu and hit you with my grip too
rhythm slips between my weapons, rises faster then heaven
ejects from the heart, bloodshed casings roll back like slot seven's
which means, I fuckin' killed myself for the sake of what I love
cut the gloves, bare knuckle boxin' for anyone who think they above
come on, try me, eye me, attempt to get by me, and get a high knee
to your dome piece, a chrome beast that stays fresh like hygiene
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Random Shit

Postby Solace » Feb 13th, '09, 21:25

Dope shit man, very few flaws but im sure you didnt work your best on this (like the whole fresh my hygiene is cliche and then 'worded verse' and 'real curse' should have been multies). Other than those its a good piece, keep it up
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Re: Random Shit

Postby mcZu » Feb 13th, '09, 21:51

Pretty dope, especially for something done in 10 min. Flow was consistent and the rhyme pattern was great aswell. Overall a nice piece :y:
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