Heated

[Ka0t1c]

i won't force my flow's course cuz i know what is more
important as i go towards the source so i'm gonna coast forward
and no one will hold me short of my restored start
i'm gonna warm your hearts like a blow torch when i spark
i'm not soft core, i'm hard, for there's a part called a chore
and i'm wantin to charge doors, i've come to alarm, you're forewarned
get runnin or torture's a-huntin, pardon my persona, i'm not like before
but when startled, there's drama, then blood's on the floor
if you're livin tomorrow, my flaw's weren't probably ignored...

[neversnooze]

kaotic nothing personal your a cool guy.

this could just be me but its kinda difficult to understand your flow that well, on this and the first line is overexxagerated and should be shortened.

but other than that it was an ok piece you have written. 7/10

[Ka0t1c]

ok, i fixed it up a lil bit so maybe u can spot the flow now, but if u don't like this piece anyways then i won't try to do an audio for it when i get the chance