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Respond To 4 Minutes (Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 16th, '09, 13:59

You callin me foreign,What do the fuk does it mean?
This shet is Insane,Kind of racism: i never seen
Im just tryna find what is inside your Mind
Nothin but lame Rhymes shitty Flows and Lines
You a Blind and im Makin you Wanna see
You faggot aint nothin but an Em Wanna be
imma fuk u ... and ur Crew in Three
Epi u aint Fine , so stick to ur Design
Im talkin to One so the rest stay Behind!!
Its still Fun,None,of u fags made me cry
u might be Alive but ur the one who Died
im my eyes ur dead i wont let u Survive
u might have 9 lives,but ill hit em with Knives
About nine times,till u see that crime shines
keep callin me biter, u a fkn dick Rider
You Aint a fkn Cypher,provide the right type of
Fake Fkn G's,Bitch Please,u a Human Disease :flower: :y: :8)

:smoking: Aint No Biting Motherfukers!
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Re: Respond To 4 Minutes (Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 16th, '09, 17:35

Coleon wrote:I'll save you the trouble and bring it to you:

Le Turn around and fuckin run for freedom
Le leave now bitch, we don’t fuckin need em
Leave you bleedin, coughing up blood while breathin
Laying on the ground slug cases beneath him
I’m such a heathen got you believing in writing
While this bitch mixes up his speaking with biting
And he’s sorta foreign and abnormal to the forum
Scabs formin where we tore em, ripped and shredded
This little biter bout to get beheaded and massacred
You ain’t hot, you’re not, atleast earned have the word
Have you heard? That’s the sound of a mass flow
That’ll flood rippin ass holes, caught in chaos
losin in the first round, like weak teams In the playoffs
Commenting my shit, get off the dick and stay off
Like an American job lately, you gettin layed off
Actin real hard, like pillows you were made soft
So now lets see you strength, cause all I see lately
teenage angst from a foreign faggot who wana date me
Dape rape me, have some of my skill bricked in is face
Lift up his skirt take his lyrical vag, put skills in it’s place

respond now
didnt u already post this lol.... :whistle:
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Re: Respond To 4 Minutes (Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 16th, '09, 17:36

Coleon wrote:I'll save you the trouble and bring it to you:

Le Turn around and fuckin run for freedom
Le leave now bitch, we don’t fuckin need em
Leave you bleedin, coughing up blood while breathin
Laying on the ground slug cases beneath him
I’m such a heathen got you believing in writing
While this bitch mixes up his speaking with biting
And he’s sorta foreign and abnormal to the forum
Scabs formin where we tore em, ripped and shredded
This little biter bout to get beheaded and massacred
You ain’t hot, you’re not, atleast earned have the word
Have you heard? That’s the sound of a mass flow
That’ll flood rippin ass holes, caught in chaos
losin in the first round, like weak teams In the playoffs
Commenting my shit, get off the dick and stay off
Like an American job lately, you gettin layed off
Actin real hard, like pillows you were made soft
So now lets see you strength, cause all I see lately
teenage angst from a foreign faggot who wana date me
Dape rape me, have some of my skill bricked in is face
Lift up his skirt take his lyrical vag, put skills in it’s place

respond now
didnt u already post this lol.... :whistle: And btw ur Lyrics are so Boring,,,Aint entertainin :whistle:
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Re: Respond To 4 Minutes (Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 16th, '09, 17:43

Coleon wrote:yeah dumb ass I said Plagiarism is Bad is the name of it but I'll save you the trouble and bring it to you dumb ass, and if you've seen it then respond stupid


you are seriously a fucking retard smh

thats my respond to ur 4 mins diss didnt u notice= )
and yours blow dicck so I guess I still win :wave:

and like i said its only ur mom who blows dick, Lyrics cant really blow dick ;)
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Re: Respond To 4 Minutes (Diss)

Postby Solace » Feb 16th, '09, 18:25

:laughing: It took him a whole day to write that! Ahaha and it was STILL crap. I lol'd at Coleon's analogy, did you notice Le Transexual that people younger than you are owning you?

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u might have 9 lives,but ill hit em with Knives
About nine times,till u see that crime shines

kay you made sense here :y: crime shines like crime pays I guess good job


Out of his what, 50 lines from his disses, these 2 are the only average ones.
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Re: Respond To 4 Minutes (Diss)

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 16th, '09, 18:50

Coleon wrote:I agree lol, he's just horrible, if he responds I'm battlin him and if not he's a pussy

im sick of battles lol,and all ur crew in ur side, no matter what i write, the vote is going to u, so aint gonna do this shet in vain
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Re: Respond To 4 Minutes (Diss)

Postby Solace » Feb 16th, '09, 19:13

le tunisien wrote:
Coleon wrote:I agree lol, he's just horrible, if he responds I'm battlin him and if not he's a pussy

im sick of battles lol,and all ur crew in ur side, no matter what i write, the vote is going to u, so aint gonna do this shet in vain

i dont dick ride dude, its not like im saying Coleon is better than you just because Coleon says hes better than you. You just really suck. Like really. Especially for your age.
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