Bored

[MC Anonymous]

you don't hear me though, Nah I'm a yeller with a habit
to spit dictionary words and complexity in a very avid
manner, yet I hear dudes who stammer worse then I do
and they ride clueless until someone throws a harpoon
when it happens, they grab their chests in disgust and yell
and scream at the person who tells the honesty well
motherfuckers we just try to help, this is why I don't feed
your greed for positive vibes, it erases the simple needs
others who bleed blue, will know what I'm talking about
instead of stalking my routes, stop bitin', bitchin', don't pout
and accept the criticism we've constructed for your benefit
if not, then it's lit, and my flame will never surrender to shit.

[Le Tunisien]

you don't hear me though, Nah I'm a yeller with a habit
to spit dictionary words and complexity in a very avid
manner, yet I hear dudes who stammer worse then I do
and they ride clueless until someone throws a harpoon
when it happens, they grab their chests in disgust and yell
and scream at the person who tells the honesty well
motherfuckers we just try to help, this is why I don't feed
your greed for positive vibes, it erases the simple needs
others who bleed blue, will know what I'm talking about
instead of stalking my routes, stop bitin', bitchin', don't pout
and accept the criticism we've constructed for your benefit
if not, then it's lit, and my flame will never surrender to shit.

any message for me through this : accept criticism we ve constructed for your benefit

Nice flow and rhymes anyways

[Ka0t1c]

good verse, i thought it was done very well, not A+ lyrics, but very respectable

[noel]

I like your other stuff more- you shouldn't have called the thread bored because (no offence) compared to other stuff you have put up on the boards this is well, a bit boring...

Sorry!!

I still love reading your stuff though- here are some flowers for you

Hope you become inspired soon and leave the boredom behind!!

[gutawafang]

LOL. It's full of words complicated. I like the way you structured this shit here. Pretty cool, Anonymus.

"and accept the criticism we've constructed for your benefit
if not, then it's lit, and my flame will never surrender to shit"
I said before, I love that two lines.

[<Stiiccy>]

loved it man...keep it up

[Solace]

I like your other stuff more- you shouldn't have called the thread bored because (no offence) compared to other stuff you have put up on the boards this is well, a bit boring...

i couldnt help to notice that you say the topic title shouldnt be called Bored because it's boring.

Anyways, good shit man. It's a lot easier to understand your meanings in this style.