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Keystylin Again

Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 20th, '09, 04:56

I'm after Currently after Currency like it's an Emergency stepping with Urgency
the haters don't Burden Me Surging Seas drown any and all Insurgent Beefs

my Mics a Weapon they Life's a Lesson you have no Right to Step In
fuck the Stryfe your Stressing I don't Like the Guessing lets Fight Depression

with Good Thoughts if only these walls Could Talk I'd be buried in a Wood Box
you Would Not Change Rain for the Same Fame that ruins some peoples Sane Brain

wanna Entertain Lames slice their Main Vein and Reclaim Pain as a Triumph
Why Jump into a Hell for Wealth if you Sell Yourself your soul will be Held

by the Devils Men fuck it I'm a Rebel Then so I'll Loc Out with my Dope Sound
outside my Foes House this is for running Yo Mouth I'm crushing your Skull Now

into Smithereens until the Picture Seems to be Faded like I Erased It
my enemies will be Faceless and Overrated when compared to Matrix

my style is Raw like a punch to your Jaw in front of a crowd of Cops
you can go Off and Talk but eventually it'll Stop you've already Lost

my Swift Knuckles swing behind This Hustle cuz somewhere a Kid Struggles
With Trouble so he Does Drugs and stays Fucked Up like full time Buzz Slut
Last edited by Rain Matrix on Feb 20th, '09, 15:48, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Keystylin Again

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 20th, '09, 13:38

it's nice, the only major typo is "knuckles"

keep it up Rain! :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Keystylin Again

Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 20th, '09, 15:49

thanks man I thought I got um all, I'm gonna try to be more active around here
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Re: Keystylin Again

Postby ¤°~ Jose ~¤°© » Feb 20th, '09, 16:58

nice man i liked it :y:
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