50 Bars

[MC Anonymous]

Guess what, I just stay with my rhymebook
sittin' with the chronic, have the nine look
over my shoulder, carrying these boulders
It's all over, the type of lyrics that really smolder
sittin', drippin' with the venom, rippin' denim
let em get them, lyrical disease is what I'm spreddin'
I'm a poltergeist, a menace, rippin' MC's like lettuce
Punchlines make rappers see the damn dentist
spit a hot sentence, hot enough for the death sentence
all because fate sees me as evil's apprentice
the majestic microphone hyper tones splittin' bones
phreaking phones, all while vibrating your home
spittin' chrome, which means I eject verbal bullets
when I rhyme I pull it, now watch it split your mullet
shit.. how could it, I let it take over my chest plate
guess now I'll tempt fate, Nazi Salute, BANG..straight
hole in my chest, what is left, is shown from the outside
organs are sliced wide, now see my bright side
bringin' the fight wide, when I rhyme it's high tide
cause' the flow penetrate life's light like night time
stay for the ride, vibe, put your grave on the line
behave for the time, God gave me these rhymes
as long as I'm alive, and my lines survive I will dive
in the belly of the beast, lyrics makes my spirit revive
I will never die, forever inclined to rhyme at light speeds
and my golden penis will only ever plant bright seeds
swipe my needs to the side, breathing hard so I
can decide wether or not I'll still spit these rhymes
Lyrically, I'm still one of the hardest to hit the scene
rhymes will rip your spleen, lyrics are drippin' mean
the peripheral of my magical lyrical composed of material
is imperial to the mental insanity of one who's serial
I said it, complicated rhymes formulated, articulated,
debated, demonstrated through rhythm, enunciated
spittin until it's resonated, then it reaches ear drums
rippin' through speared gums, now you have to fear one
my gears run, fueled with nitroglycerin, a pyro citizen
rippin this medicine, faster then turbines on jet engines
It takes more then antibiotics to stop the psychotic
drop the narcotic, and stop cuttin' with ya fine objects
my rhymes blind optics, verbal insanity pronounced
and then I pounce on any thug for just a fluid ounce
I love what I do, I do it the way I see I should do it
when I spew it, it comes out faster then dicks can shoot it
go ahead and compute it, I spark brain cells like weed
you get sliced and diced faster then I can breathe
This is a message to all MC's, I'm back in my throne
and no one is gonna knock me out of my zone

[gutawafang]

all because fate sees me as evil's apprentice
I love that.

spittin' chrome, which means I eject verbal bullets
WOW.

cause' the flow penetrate life's light like night time
Great metaphor.

hole in my chest, what is left, is shown from the outside
DAMN nice.

Overall, I give it an 8. I could flow like the waterfall. And all the vocab I can feel. You used the words very wisely. Keep it up dude.

[MC Anonymous]

all because fate sees me as evil's apprentice
I love that.

spittin' chrome, which means I eject verbal bullets
WOW.

cause' the flow penetrate life's light like night time
Great metaphor.

hole in my chest, what is left, is shown from the outside
DAMN nice.

Overall, I give it an 8. I could flow like the waterfall. And all the vocab I can feel. You used the words very wisely. Keep it up dude.

Thanks dude

[Solace]

Yeah what he said, dude that flow was good. When you usually write long lines i have trouble flowing them, i may get it after a while but this was just easy to spot and understand. Dope shit as well, lyrically. lol it reminds me of that 100 bars topic you made (i think that was it)

[MC Anonymous]

Yeah what he said, dude that flow was good. When you usually write long lines i have trouble flowing them, i may get it after a while but this was just easy to spot and understand. Dope shit as well, lyrically. lol it reminds me of that 100 bars topic you made (i think that was it)

Thanks man, yeah it was 100bars

[Requiem]

really long read man, lol. i skimmed
but i have to say flow is on point man, ur improving alot with it.

as long as I'm alive, and my lines survive I will dive
in the belly of the beast, lyrics makes my spirit revive

^my favorite lines. great style on that. u've shown TR how to own things with complications, great job man
and yea, reminds me of the 100 bars

[MC Anonymous]

really long read man, lol. i skimmed
but i have to say flow is on point man, ur improving alot with it.

as long as I'm alive, and my lines survive I will dive
in the belly of the beast, lyrics makes my spirit revive

^my favorite lines. great style on that. u've shown TR how to own things with complications, great job man
and yea, reminds me of the 100 bars

Thanks dude, and LOL@ reference to 100 bars. Seems like nobody forgot

[Requiem]

really long read man, lol. i skimmed
but i have to say flow is on point man, ur improving alot with it.

as long as I'm alive, and my lines survive I will dive
in the belly of the beast, lyrics makes my spirit revive

^my favorite lines. great style on that. u've shown TR how to own things with complications, great job man
and yea, reminds me of the 100 bars

Thanks dude, and LOL@ reference to 100 bars. Seems like nobody forgot

who could forget? u had that beef on thier if i remember correctly purplehaze's ass

[Boston]

like the ripping mc's like lettuce line for some reason
you said majestic, oh shit thats a sign, telling people to peep the new track haha. nah but
this was a nice piece, some punchlines were just.. idk.. basic ones, didnt really make me re-read em over and all that. but in the middle i liked the rhyme scheme/flow (lyrically, im one of the hardest to hit the scene etc) the dicks can spew it punchline is also nice, i said something like that before. haha. but yeah, this is a good solid drop. keep it up

btw, nice little message at the end haha.

[MC Anonymous]

like the ripping mc's like lettuce line for some reason
you said majestic, oh shit thats a sign, telling people to peep the new track haha. nah but
this was a nice piece, some punchlines were just.. idk.. basic ones, didnt really make me re-read em over and all that. but in the middle i liked the rhyme scheme/flow (lyrically, im one of the hardest to hit the scene etc) the dicks can spew it punchline is also nice, i said something like that before. haha. but yeah, this is a good solid drop. keep it up

btw, nice little message at the end haha.

Thanks dude

[MC Anonymous]

Was pretty good. The read itself flowed pretty nicely, and everything seemed in place. Your rhymes are easier to understand now, and some of the metaphors are quite nice. Punchlines were nice for the most part, but I personally don't like punchlines, so I'm bias. Overall 8.5/10

Pretty damn good.

Thanks bro! Always happy to see you enjoy my work

[James R.]

Nothing I haven't seen you do before. That said it was a great read. Flow was the shining aspect of it. Hard to feed you cuz your shit is really consistent lol.