"Farewells" Depart

[Ka0t1c]

i can't calm down no matter how much you try to tear me apart, watch
you won't get inside me cuz now i steer with my heart so i'm hittin the mark
i swear i'm not hiding, i am here with my art from my spirit that harks
cuz i came to share my lyrics i'm writing, the cure has been hard
but the error's worth fighting, are you scared of the dark
the clearer the lighting will prepare a new start
who carries your guiding, be aware, very smart
ideas' more inviting than a parrot remarking on the terrors embarked
premier and keep climbing, good material shall chart
every period's timing of a career where your smarts
endured thru various rhyming by your serious march
here's my series inclining, let the "farewells" depart

farewells - let the old artists leave in peace

[Urban Punk]

I liked it your rhyme's were good though at the start i couldn't get the flow... though when i got into it... it flowed well, i think the only improvement you could make would be to make it a little more complex though it ant far from that good work... keep it up bro

[Ka0t1c]

thanx, i appreciate your input!

[Rain Matrix]

you never rhyme the same shit twice... keep it fresh cuz it's better that way

[¤°~ Jose ~¤°©]

nice man i always rap everything out to see if i can go with the flow

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for your comments