not somebody to mess with

[Spyder]

No i may not be from detriot but im here to destroy
evertime you try to step to me you better set a decoy.
now rejoice, im built better than the old egyptian temples
your cheaper than movie rentals, and fuckin boobie tesseles.
im not somebody to mess with, dangerous like highspeed chases
run up in your crib and shoot you, leave you shot in nine deep places
these faces, are getting old but i can tell im striking fear
because everytime i battle they straight put on their fighting gear
siting queers, gettin outa here headin to hollywood on the bigscreen
to make big g's, you cant touch me im protected by mafckn marinees
leave the scene, for they link me to the crime. stood in line
and killed every witness, wasnt none of their business...goodbye.
im sicker than noramn bates and got a betta flow that obie trice
those who have beaten me know they can never hold me twice
what a site, it is to acommplice a miracle that I comit
run quick, cuz my lyrics will make you pyshically submit

feedback appreciated

[Solace]

Pretty good man, some nice lines in there. Flow was on and off for me. The rhyme scheme was all over the place so I'm guessing you weren't concentrating on that. Good piece man.

[Ice_Scarred]

Flow is defintely there and lyrics are not bad. Vocabulary is pretty vivid. Awesome drop man!

[noel]

cool-

*chanting and bowing ...*

"I submit... I submit..."

[BlueWolf]

im built better than the old egyptian temples

Great line, nice job on the whole thing , good read.

[rahul.never2far]

Damn homie... it was tight!

I really liked the Detroit and Egyptian line... nice vocabulary as well...

[gutawafang]

Good. Just good. Keep it up dude.

I think "and killed every witness, wasnt none of their business...goodbye." was the best in this verse.

[Spyder]

thanks guys

[Slim Zaddy]

that's good shit home , i love it ,, you had some good lines there ,, lyrics was okay , but the flow was on and off for me ,, rhymes are nice ,, pretty good job overall ,, keep it up bro