The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Sticcy's notebook part ll

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Sticcy's notebook part ll

Postby <Stiiccy> » Feb 23rd, '09, 03:01

some more shit i will never use..

put ya hands in the air, like ya feel the icey hot,
pile up in the crowd, till we fill the parkin lot,
every girl in da place, dancin off barcidi shots,
and every hoodrat here, lemma see you inner crouch,
i dont play no games, i dont get played either,
leave ya with a frown, like when jay heard ether,
let the bass get ya down, let snare get ya up,
and tell ya boyfreind, that you out for a fuck,
i like a little skinny girl, that can sing up my raps
go to sluts united, and pick her from rehab,
yeh i see you starin, cuzz you want what we have,
im feelin cock strong, and killed some arabs,



give me one good reason, why i should give a fuck,
accordin to you, shit aint nuttin but luck,
and my sound aint bumpin, and aint nobody heard me,
but ya fat ass self, is sittin up wid no learnin,
wid a fake ass label, what the fuck is that,
no respect over here, you faggots cant rap,
got the goth kids cyin, man shut the fuck up,
eat diccup till ya hiccup ya brain is slowly rippin,
big fat mutha fucka, wid ugly ass bitch,
done know twenty dudes who done hit dat shit,
satanic fag shit, dont call me spaztic,
get pissed off at everone, even fuckin plastic,
killa wid some chap stick, no time for you faggots,
back to da lab, for molestin and rappin,
gotta studio in cabin, to blast you bastards,
fuck sicktanick, and all of dat fag shit


the sajjad diss that will never be used hahaha...
i aint neva had a beef, where i didnt come correct,
but this mutha fucka here, bout to lose his fuckin neck,
got his mom phone, yo keep him check,
got tears on his face, an emotional wreck,
im in the top 5 artist, i got it in coast speed,
only in ya dreams, will you eva roast me,
you mentally deprived, you got no eccence,
we da mutha fuckin kings, man you just fuckin peasant,
you left the fuckin earth, when i left you the message,
i had 1 mic, and i murdered ya ass wid it,
yo moms a whore, ya fuckin dads a loser,
in fact all ya family, done sexualy abused ya,
ill burn the kuran, then piss on its ashes,
fuck muslims man, i hate there asses,
genocide for the masses, herpessiphleitis rashes,
i beat you fuckin head in with dynimate and light matches,


i never ever knew, i could get this blew,
off of 2 ounces of q, and some red pikachu,
three left on the plate, i could only down two,
started with me and you, then came some other few,
once they died off, it was up to me and you,
taste my barbecue, black berry artic chew,
dude its to narly, chris farly even couldnt match up to you, cant catch up to you,
it goin down da drain, let spit back up the remains,
to where it doesnt the same, destroys our mind frame,
tears are in the rain, mother left in shame,
smelt what we bakin, and they left the same way
air conditioner fluid, yeah in my system fluent,
put it on your tounge, taste it then chew it,


got 1 trillion dollars, we piss it down the drain,
then take every moral value, and give his ass an arabic name
he takes center stage, as he locks me in a cage,
feels me full of rage, drivin me completly insane,
fuck mccain, fuck world and all of you,
all we search for now, is quest for spirtual solitude,
go ahead follow dude, why aint ya supportin now,
tax us out the ass, what happen to all the supportin now
revolionize anarchy, socialism on the brink
whating allied countries sink,
thought about change id rather not think,
wana know why, id rather not tell,
man its ammusin, to whatch the whole country fail,
burnnin in hell the furnace expelled,
learnin to hail, lock me up in a cell,
droppin bomb shells, droppin next to me,
aint nuttin betta than, a hit a that triple stack extacy
arrestin me, nation investin me,
testin me, hataz east and west of me,
take the rest of me, im runnin on e,
lost a full tank, i cant afford to bring,
beggin the lord to bring, as we stand together and sing,
the hym for the dead, remember what i said,
its time for a change, but not this drastic,
you faggots think facist, will bring your ass some cash in,
lash em bash em tax em, fax em all your plans man,
tell em what you want, i see right through you,


ehh nuthing special i know...thats why i aint usin the shit hahahaha
Sticcy Z
Prison in Febuary, i don't give no fuckkssss
Image
Saten is here
User avatar
<Stiiccy>
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3386
Joined: Dec 28th, '07, 14:48
Location: United States bitch
Gender: Male

Re: Sticcy's notebook part ll

Postby James R. » Feb 23rd, '09, 03:10

You should use it all. Even the diss shit you could change to be general battle rap type shit. I liked a lot of it honestly. Flow was iffy, but you do audio so that won't be a problem more than likely. And the lyrics had some nice punches and some were pretty funny.
User avatar
James R.
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 5044
Joined: Apr 25th, '07, 20:31
Location: Pittsburgh, PA
Gender: Male

Re: Sticcy's notebook part ll

Postby <Stiiccy> » Feb 23rd, '09, 03:12

James R. wrote:You should use it all. Even the diss shit you could change to be general battle rap type shit. I liked a lot of it honestly. Flow was iffy, but you do audio so that won't be a problem more than likely. And the lyrics had some nice punches and some were pretty funny.

haha thanks man...i might use it who knows
Sticcy Z
Prison in Febuary, i don't give no fuckkssss
Image
Saten is here
User avatar
<Stiiccy>
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3386
Joined: Dec 28th, '07, 14:48
Location: United States bitch
Gender: Male

Re: Sticcy's notebook part ll

Postby Urban Punk » Feb 24th, '09, 17:27

I liked them all though the last one done it for me just the concept, flow and vocab were the best :y:
I've mastered numerology and big bang theology, Performed lobotomies with telekinetic psychology http://www.bebo.com/Devilville
User avatar
Urban Punk
Trailer Trash
Trailer Trash
 
Posts: 125
Joined: Sep 2nd, '08, 18:02
Location: The Land Of Nod...
Gender: Male

Re: Sticcy's notebook part ll

Postby gutawafang » Feb 24th, '09, 17:31

Seriously, you should consider using some. Pretty good. :happy:
ADD ME ON PS4: gutawafang
Currently playing: Destiny
Image
TR Rap Battle Record: 23-8
User avatar
gutawafang
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 9474
Joined: Dec 13th, '07, 08:01
Location: Lion City
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users

cron