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Life is a Nightmare

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Life is a Nightmare

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 18:00

Ok so this is somethin i wrote in class while i was bored :flower: :p check it out :)
As a Slave im so Brave,Alone in this Cave
I would Shave my nutt,just to Save my butt
Why not?tThis is place is is so cold and hot
Sittin in the same spot,i would rather get shot
Never knew a Season,neither a summer's Day
I Pray for a reason,it aint pleasin to stay
I Got fate and im Screamin,What is the Date?
is it fkn Temperate,is it june or May??
No love no Hate,Thats why My Eye Shines
And Every Fair from Fair sometimes Declines
How Long it has to be?so Wrong i couldnt See
its just myself and Me,Alone we aint Three
I would get on a Knee,"God Send me Free!!"
Lonely as a Cloud,Never Saw A Crowd
Nothin to talk about,so i just close my Mouth
So silent Aint Loud,im allowed to be Proud
of not havin a Couch,not relaxin in a house
on nowhere i could Lie,thats why i close my Eye
I never got High,And Would Prefer to Die
To see the other World,I could just be a spy
Always in a bad mood,Aint nothin GOod
Always in Solitude,Aint no Food in the Hood
And I Would if i Could,Or Should to be Sued
For Bein in a Lake, I Would Bake My Mistake
it is Never Late,to become so fuckin Great
And kill the Fake,Yeah that is what i Make
My Life is a Nightmare,somethin i wont fail
Just For Gods Sake,Learn to give and Take
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Re: Life is a Nightmare

Postby gutawafang » Feb 24th, '09, 18:11

Nice. I could flow well. Really, the way you rhyme seems like we got something in common dude. I really liked it. And yeah, I write rhymes in class too! So :beerchug:
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Re: Life is a Nightmare

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 18:42

gutawafang wrote:Nice. I could flow well. Really, the way you rhyme seems like we got something in common dude. I really liked it. And yeah, I write rhymes in class too! So :beerchug:

hehe thx fish :flower: :8) xd
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Re: Life is a Nightmare

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 24th, '09, 19:35

i liked it man , it flowed well as said ,, your structure is fire ,, i liked the rhymes and lyrics used ,, it's was nice ,, i kinda prefer nutt and butt line , this is funny shit man ,, gd job here LE .. keep it up pal :y:
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Re: Life is a Nightmare

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 24th, '09, 19:48

z_em wrote:i liked it man , it flowed well as said ,, your structure is fire ,, i liked the rhymes and lyrics used ,, it's was nice ,, i kinda prefer nutt and butt line , this is funny shit man ,, gd job here LE .. keep it up pal :y:

Waaaaaaa Thanks Homie!! hehehehe :p cool :8)
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