flamez rhymez

[¤°~ Jose ~¤°©]

locked up loaded ready to strike at any given time
in my prime spittin' punchlines they say its a crime
with fire power in every rhyme i'm shining bright
givin' fearful fright on this stage late at midnight
one bite from these venoumous fangs spittin' blood
u drop dead to the ground from this overflowing flood
simplistic shit breezin' right thru hear the hurricane thud
your feet bashin' thru this dirty mud runnin' inside my lyrical mind
chicks get hit from behind just bump n' grind and get intertwined
i'm on the grind terrorizin' cities counties states every border line
breakin' spines i'm a fine muthafucka with divine skills that shine
a sketchy design exploring emotions a rapper's digest to fiery implosions
i combine the potent potions with toxic poison resultin' in nuclear explosions

[gutawafang]

You bit a few lines. But you twisted them and made it original. So it's

Good job!