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Postby stevethetruth » Feb 27th, '09, 13:56

nobody makes my heart melt like you do
so quick and true never have turned blue
never down or sad always proud and glad
u love me more when i'm somewhat mad and bad
you love me back, like that, our loves a pact
something pure and secure never knocked off track
you ever leave my side believe i'll knock one back
so empty hearted, a shot of this and gallon of that
not just one but quite a few bottles of brew
till my pain fades in the air for an hour or two
cause in reality all i think of is casually you
and i hate leaving your side every time i do
i get sad and depressed as i leave each day
so believe me baby this love will never fade
each new day i grow more and more attached
u hold my key honey, baby including the latch
just loving your smile reminiscing your laugh
so happy our love's final and not a draft
http://www.myspace.com/stevethetruth <-- my myspace add me!!
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Re: wrote this a long time ago

Postby neversnooze » Feb 27th, '09, 22:47

ohhhh we have a poet! nothing that caught my eye but i enjoyed the read. it was short and simple. this could be inspirational for many people who go through this.

8/10 :happy:
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Re: wrote this a long time ago

Postby Solace » Feb 27th, '09, 22:56

neversnooze wrote:ohhhh we have a poet! nothing that caught my eye but i enjoyed the read. it was short and simple. this could be inspirational for many people who go through this.

8/10 :happy:

Cant say much more than neversnooze did, good job on it, not the best ive seen here but definitely a good short read.
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