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k-digga diss.

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Re: k-digga diss.

Postby Xray » Feb 27th, '09, 16:46

"only time your hot is on your knees... with rug burns"

I liked that line, rest was alright, definitely killed his shit. I read it nearly died laughing.
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Re: k-digga diss.

Postby neversnooze » Feb 27th, '09, 22:59

you dissed k-digga educationally lol. i liked how you described his writing capabilities to 4th grade :D . some areas of the diss didnt rhymed, it was somewhat like a metaphorical story which was still enjoyable to read. personals, you used his diss against himself(about his bad skills)

you definetly one against this guy :worship:
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Re: k-digga diss.

Postby neversnooze » Feb 27th, '09, 23:07

McMaybe wrote:
neversnooze wrote:you dissed k-digga educationally lol. i liked how you described his writing capabilities to 4th grade :D . some areas of the diss didnt rhymed, it was somewhat like a metaphorical story which was still enjoyable to read. personals, you used his diss against himself(about his bad skills)

you definetly one against this guy :worship:


Thanks a lot ^ Only part that didn't rhyme was like in the flow, where you're supposed to say it and pause for a second.


Ohh my bad, i was reading it like poetry. I keep forgetting its rap lol.

again it was a good write
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Re: k-digga diss.

Postby Solace » Mar 1st, '09, 03:48

Not sure if you saw what i said about it, but i loved it.
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Re: k-digga diss.

Postby killmaster56 » Mar 1st, '09, 05:21

Just amazing MC.... Have you recorded any tracks. I only seen the one on your myspace and it was sick and ive been trying to find more of you...
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Re: k-digga diss.

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 1st, '09, 08:45

damn McMaybe , this is hot bro , i hve already seen that there ,, but ya it's sick ,, pretty clever and funny ,, :b: :b: :y:
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