What I've Done

[Wreck]

I drop dimes- like I was a bank teller
I pop nines- old yeller, young Rockefeller
papa tell ya, when I was young momma warned Wreck
I pick bones clean, pick chickens- call me corn fed
no K-Fed, and I love girl on girl action- now what's becoming of the same sex?
spray techs, stay respect-ed, so nobody but me is affected
I, stay tested- pray and become blessed then
my confessions, like Usher- are bigger then the question
"Am I good enough", make it DEFAULT, that I'm wasting one's time
I POP off, but the gun is not mine
I get money, get sun, son- sometimes
do not question or become obsessed with one's rhymes
Still, I get bitches, hotter then T. Parker's
dumbfounded, it's dumb out, but I smarter
I fly charters, so get high Lidle
waiting for the world- but the world is my idol
but not "American", this world is my heritage
Irish & German blood for all Samaritans
check the cash- Jersey is where the best is at
Budden, Just Blaze, Wreck- don't disrespect where I'm at
or where I'm from, what I've done like LP
wait on my LP- I'm just being patient, don't sell me
getting healthy, getting ready & flipping wealthy
The booth is Phoenix summers- it's getting hot like Nelly


Bump...

[Wreck]

Feeeed please...

[DelinQuent]

not feedback but just wanted to let you know

"i drop dimes" that means you're a snitch. to drop a dime is to give info to police...

[Wreck]

not feedback but just wanted to let you know

"i drop dimes" that means you're a snitch. to drop a dime is to give info to police...

No, dropping dimes can also mean passing the ball (effectively) in basketball and getting tons of assists, which is what I was referring to, not snitching, in the metaphor. I heard it when an announcer was talking about Chris Paul of NO Hornets. So no, I'm not a snitch/not referring to it, but thanks for looking out somewhat. But feed would be appreciated as well...

[Slim Zaddy]

it sounded good , the flow . it's off and on for me , structure need to be fixed a little bit .. vocabs were good but weak , i liked the rhyme scheme , it could fit as a freestyle or somethin , nothing creative about it , but still i enjoyed it .. so gd here bro ..

[Wreck]

it sounded good , but you lack the flow . it's off and on, structure need to be fixed a little bit .. vocabs were good but weak , i liked the rhyme scheme , it could fit as a freestyle or somethin , nothing creative about it , but still i enjoyed it .. so gd here bro ..

Thanks brotha 4 the feed. Yeah no doubt, flow is off and needs work. I also lose count and go off when I'm on the net typing lines- as far as the (1-2) structure goes, but I just need to be more conscience, that's all. Thanks again.

[gutawafang]

Structure could be improved. I could not really rap it out well. Some rhymings were bad. I think you can figure it out. However, the concept's there. Keep it higher.

[Wreck]

Structure could be improved. I could not really rap it out well. Some rhymings were bad. I think you can figure it out. However, the concept's there. Keep it higher.

Thanks for the feed again, and the honest feed at that- I appreciate it and will take it and improve.