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Hidden Verse 2

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 2nd, '09, 02:20

Same deal with this one...

spit a 12 gauge punchline at the earth's core
rearrange tectonic plates to shake ya crew more
my flow rides nautical miles, got a tropical style
a dictionary's child, hurdle over obstacle miles
I can't spit 100% capacity, I don't have the audacity
the mic would implode like a black hole, actually
I'll roundhouse line the mic, breakin' barriers
illness spreads turning all listeners to carriers
juggle nitrogen bombs, consume, then erosion
occurs in the colon, regurgitate, windpipe explosion
mouth a gernade launcher, flying punchlines fight
the light turns dark cause' it's filled with fright
explosive delight, if I rhyme again I fear the globe
will explode, I have a hold, hopin' my skill is sold
get slammed in two, who knew I spew this too
when I rhyme the mic receives verbal abuse.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Hidden Verse 2

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 2nd, '09, 02:22

this one is quite nice tho, so glad u put this one out, although i wish u wrote more for this
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Hidden Verse 2

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 2nd, '09, 02:23

Kaotic wrote:this one is quite nice tho, so glad u put this one out, although i wish u wrote more for this

Meh these were keystyles that came to me, I thought they were good for collab verses that's why I didn't release them. Nobody wanted to take my offers so they became void lol.
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Re: Hidden Verse 2

Postby threeandtwenty » Mar 2nd, '09, 02:54

liked this better than 1...whats a keystyle?
whose arm is this?..i must've cut it off at the pharmacist
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Re: Hidden Verse 2

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 2nd, '09, 03:09

threeandtwenty wrote:liked this better than 1...whats a keystyle?

A freestyle by typing.
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Re: Hidden Verse 2

Postby gutawafang » Mar 2nd, '09, 03:55

not bad. not as good as others you did though. i give it a moderate pass. :D
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