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THE KING

Postby Leviathan » Mar 8th, '09, 01:29

Yo whaddup, I am currently working on a new track for a West Coast mixtape coming out this year...

I aint wanna do this but Im bore'd as fuuuuuckkk...This is jus a 16..Not the whole track
Holla at me if you tryin to do some collabs or some shit (NO B.S) and dont try jackin none these shits cuz it is copyrighted by Straight From Tha Attic Records/RAMProductions Seattle Tacoma beotch!!

(Intro)
[[Royal music playing in the background, a strong yell comes from a large crowd as if the king has come into veiw]]

[Verse 1]
Ayo,Quit ya'll and let thee King come at all ya'll indirectly
Never correct me,Unless we come to agree that you can eject me//
From the game,But you fools best not try testin me,
Cuz you get cut inside out like hysterectomy's//

Rap is one sided, so quit actin like you tha thing,
This is my hustle dawg and Im'a stay maneuvering//
I'm the hottest spitten,thats why bitches stay glued to me,
Cuz Im always in the pussy like a Nuva Ring//

These mothafuckas takin shots,But they get they whole hobby slain,
Cuz I shit on these fools like I aint potty trained//
Dude wants to diss now,But I don't really give a shit now,
Cuz I'll beat tha bitch down like I'm Chris Brown//

Get loud,Cuz I'm aimen for the top this is my own mission,
Im tryin to get my Bill up but Im No Piston//
Think if you want to box,cuz thats an embarrassin plan,
Cause I never touch the ground like the American flag//

[Chorus]

Thats all I can give out! When the song is mastered and all that good junk I will post it on here (Im not sure how but I will) in the meantime, holla at me if you tryin to collab leviathan2_53@yahoo.com
make the subject trshady or some shit cuz I dont be really readin all my emails n shit
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Re: THE KING

Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 8th, '09, 05:17

Leviathan wrote:Yo whaddup, I am currently working on a new track for a West Coast mixtape coming out this year...

I aint wanna do this but Im bore'd as fuuuuuckkk...This is jus a 16..Not the whole track
Holla at me if you tryin to do some collabs or some shit (NO B.S) and dont try jackin none these shits cuz it is copyrighted by Straight From Tha Attic Records/RAMProductions Seattle Tacoma beotch!!

(Intro)
[[Royal music playing in the background, a strong yell comes from a large crowd as if the king has come into veiw]]

[Verse 1]
Ayo,Quit ya'll and let thee King come at all ya'll indirectly
Never correct me,Unless we come to agree that you can eject me//
From the game,But you fools best not try testin me,
Cuz you get cut inside out like hysterectomy's//

Rap is one sided, so quit actin like you tha thing,
This is my hustle dawg and Im'a stay maneuvering//
I'm the hottest spitten,thats why bitches stay glued to me,
Cuz Im always in the pussy like a Nuva Ring//

These mothafuckas takin shots,But they get they whole hobby slain,
Cuz I shit on these fools like I aint potty trained//
Dude wants to diss now,But I don't really give a shit now,
Cuz I'll beat tha bitch down like I'm Chris Brown//

Get loud,Cuz I'm aimen for the top this is my own mission,
Im tryin to get my Bill up but Im No Piston//
Think if you want to box,cuz thats an embarrassin plan,
Cause I never touch the ground like the American flag//

[Chorus]

Thats all I can give out! When the song is mastered and all that good junk I will post it on here (Im not sure how but I will) in the meantime, holla at me if you tryin to collab leviathan2_53@yahoo.com
make the subject trshady or some shit cuz I dont be really readin all my emails n shit


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Re: THE KING

Postby Solace » Mar 8th, '09, 05:22

MC Anonymous wrote:
Leviathan wrote:Yo whaddup, I am currently working on a new track for a West Coast mixtape coming out this year...

I aint wanna do this but Im bore'd as fuuuuuckkk...This is jus a 16..Not the whole track
Holla at me if you tryin to do some collabs or some shit (NO B.S) and dont try jackin none these shits cuz it is copyrighted by Straight From Tha Attic Records/RAMProductions Seattle Tacoma beotch!!

(Intro)
[[Royal music playing in the background, a strong yell comes from a large crowd as if the king has come into veiw]]

[Verse 1]
Ayo,Quit ya'll and let thee King come at all ya'll indirectly
Never correct me,Unless we come to agree that you can eject me//
From the game,But you fools best not try testin me,
Cuz you get cut inside out like hysterectomy's//

Rap is one sided, so quit actin like you tha thing,
This is my hustle dawg and Im'a stay maneuvering//
I'm the hottest spitten,thats why bitches stay glued to me,
Cuz Im always in the pussy like a Nuva Ring//

These mothafuckas takin shots,But they get they whole hobby slain,
Cuz I shit on these fools like I aint potty trained//
Dude wants to diss now,But I don't really give a shit now,
Cuz I'll beat tha bitch down like I'm Chris Brown//

Get loud,Cuz I'm aimen for the top this is my own mission,
Im tryin to get my Bill up but Im No Piston//
Think if you want to box,cuz thats an embarrassin plan,
Cause I never touch the ground like the American flag//

[Chorus]

Thats all I can give out! When the song is mastered and all that good junk I will post it on here (Im not sure how but I will) in the meantime, holla at me if you tryin to collab leviathan2_53@yahoo.com
make the subject trshady or some shit cuz I dont be really readin all my emails n shit


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Anyways. It was good man, nothing like OH SHIT, but you got it. Some funny lil punches in there like the potty line rofl. What was the point of putting "Chorus" there when you didnt post up the chorus? And yeah im sure we arent that stupid as to not notice the multies lol, no point of bolding it.

This part is the only one i didnt really like:

Rap is one sided, so quit actin like you tha thing,
This is my hustle dawg and Im'a stay maneuvering//
I'm the hottest spitten,thats why bitches stay glued to me,
Cuz Im always in the pussy like a Nuva Ring//
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Re: THE KING

Postby Leviathan » Mar 8th, '09, 05:38

WUT THE NUVA RING IS CRACKIN! U kno wut the nuva ring is Im hopin..My bad bout tha chorus & bold n shit..I have my shit on my iphone,so I just copied & pasted it off my lil notepad thing & pasted it on this webpage, So..my thing is reading lyrics dont really do some artists justice, My flow is wut makes my words stick out..so words I slur, you kno how it is..all artists do it..Im jus wonderin wut that one dudes reply was wit dem faces I have no clue wut that is..hopefully its coo & not disrespect..anyways holla
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Re: THE KING

Postby Solace » Mar 8th, '09, 05:59

Leviathan wrote:WUT THE NUVA RING IS CRACKIN! U kno wut the nuva ring is Im hopin..My bad bout tha chorus & bold n shit..I have my shit on my iphone,so I just copied & pasted it off my lil notepad thing & pasted it on this webpage, So..my thing is reading lyrics dont really do some artists justice, My flow is wut makes my words stick out..so words I slur, you kno how it is..all artists do it..Im jus wonderin wut that one dudes reply was wit dem faces I have no clue wut that is..hopefully its coo & not disrespect..anyways holla

Yeah it was disrespect lol it means "that was bad when your claiming the king" but dont take it personal. Yeah i know what a nuva ring is i just didnt really like the punch.
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