Fish Keystyle 1

[gutawafang]

I call upon monsters with a whistle
Then a cyclone approaches and the leaves bristle
Trees uproot, and your rhymes no use
I then took advantage, abused
I destroy your music with a spit of booze
It's a wild goose on the loose
It's a bull, bullshit, full of shit
No wait, I'm tired of raving and ranting
I've been running for miles and I'm panting
I need a towel, a white one's to surrender
I'm screaming "fuck you" in the club's center
In the middle actually, fuck the world naturally
God doesn't answer to my prayers, really
Oh why am I wasting my time kicking this rhyme?
I might as well flip the birds and free it this time
Fuck it, I need a life, I need a life
I want a wife, I want a wife
I feel so high, so hi, nice to meet ya
Bitcha, gotcha, roger, goddamn, shit ya
Monsters behind me like a fucking army ready to fight
Ready to die battling against you tonight
Fuck fuck, I'm out of here, let's end this stupid rhyme
See you next time, everybody throw me a dime
Please
Peace
Out
Out

[Nu Syd]

pretty good , nice read, Trees uproot, and your rhymes no use line I liked a lot

[gutawafang]

pretty good , nice read, Trees uproot, and your rhymes no use line I liked a lot

Arigato.

[Slim Zaddy]

hahahahha , some lines were funny to me , i liked it bro, it's very good to a freestyle , it's flowed smoothly and good to me , gd job here pal.. keep it up

[gutawafang]

Woohoo! Thunk you! I will do more freestyle when I'm FREE!!!

Thanks z em!

[Solace]

I dont see at all how this was a good freestyle, no offense man. It was boring to me and the matter was dumb. There was quite a little small amount of multies. Rhyme scheme was off, like you go "boose, loose" which rhymes, "shit, ranting" which slant rhymes then "panting, surrender" which doesnt rhyme at all you know? Keep at freestyling dude.

[gutawafang]

I dont see at all how this was a good freestyle, no offense man. It was boring to me and the matter was dumb. There was quite a little small amount of multies. Rhyme scheme was off, like you go "boose, loose" which rhymes, "shit, ranting" which slant rhymes then "panting, surrender" which doesnt rhyme at all you know? Keep at freestyling dude.

Yeah, I will improve. Thanks for the feed yo.