Thoughts

[MC Anonymous]

Wander corridors, empty rooms with cold drafts
spit shine my jaws and flow on the bold rafts
I'm achin', didn't know it would take so long
most friends I've ever had been fake and wrong
melted verse, my passion flows seamlessly
and I often wonder why death is teasing me
I walk on hot tar, expecting not to be burned
Yet my feet melt vividly, and they rip by the turn
A shadowless soul, hidden between reality's gate
speaking, and is not heard by humanities fate
ignored as a pawn, and respected by the few
when discovered, it's to late, it already failed you
speech and English, a langauge written by man
yet when written is changed to liquid, they do not understand
I say this, diversity is disregarded as religion
beliefs of creation, trashed as false decisions
ideologies of false hope shine in the blind light
you accept them and you are gone from eye sight
why, why does humanity fall to the deception
United States fell after the first election

[MC Anonymous]

Bump

[mcZu]

Concept was not bad, it gave an inside view on what go's on in your mind. You displayed your thoughts pretty vivid yet something was lacking. I dunno what it is, I can't put my hands on it yet, but something felt out of place. Though the flow was on point, rhymes were good and the lyrical content was above average. Enjoyable to say the least. I dunno if this is finished, 'cause it felt short, nonetheless it's good.

[Leviathan]

[MC Anonymous]

[gutawafang]