Hell's Abortion

[mcZu]

Enjoyable to say the least, flow was off at some points, though the creative imaginary made up for it.
I liked it.

[Solace]

It was okay but ive felt youve done 10x better than this before. These 2 could have been taken out, kinda ruined it for me at that point

I’m intellectually a better MC
than Steven Hawking could be

Keep at it dude.

[Slim Zaddy]

it's okay , nothing great about it , as solace said ,i hve seen you done much better than this one,, dont focus on the quantity of your writing cuz i hve seen you writing so much pieces so focus on the quality , it's better to write 1 good piece rather than writing 10 trash pieces ,, it's just as an example .. but i'm expectin better from ya coleon , keep it up bro

[gutawafang]

I think this way's the best:

FLOW - 4/10
STRUCTURE - 3/10
PUNCHES - 8/10
MULTIES - 4/10
RHYMES - 7/10
VOCAB - 8/10
COMPLEXITY - 8/10

I think it's not that good. From the title, I expected more. I mean, I expected better expressions. And multis were not really used.