it was alright, pretty simple to follow and like you said, wasnt lyrical or complex. this piece has a tough and then laidback flow to it, demonstrates your enthusiasm.
overall i enjoyed it, just that last line seemed like a cliche(chess)
8/10
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Re: Skirmish
by neversnooze » Mar 11th, '09, 16:19
Sometimes I stay up so late that I have my morning coffee before I go to bed
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