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Lee O Mac Productionz

Postby leeomac » Mar 9th, '09, 16:03

Lee O Mac productionz is in the house
All the rappers on this damn website are quiter than a lil mouse
Im the new kid on the block as far as this site is concerned
But any rapper who steps upto me prepare to get burned
Im as hot as fire
You better think quick
I will spit more bars than you could ever think
After i get done with you
You would wish you could just shrink!
Stepping upto me is madness
You need to go and see a shrink...

I challenge anyone on here to a rap battle :angry:
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Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 9th, '09, 16:13

man what is this .. shred what you wrote , you must use multies , punchlines, metaphors, similes , some harsh dissing lines, played lines, solid lyrics, good rhymes , then later , come and challenge who ever you want, but with this , nah i dont think that you're up to anyone, i dont mean to be mean , but that's the truth ..
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Postby MC Anonymous » Mar 9th, '09, 18:36

Slim Zaddy wrote:man what is this .. shred what you wrote , you must use multies , punchlines, metaphors, similes , some harsh dissing lines, played lines, solid lyrics, good rhymes , then later , come and challenge who ever you want, but with this , nah i dont think that you're up to anyone, i dont mean to be mean , but that's the truth ..

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Re: Lee O Mac Productionz

Postby Solace » Mar 9th, '09, 21:27

Lmfao that was a piece of shit.
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Postby James R. » Mar 10th, '09, 00:06

hahahahahahahaha that was like someone shadow boxing and then challenging a randomer from the crowd to step up. the hell is wrong with you?
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Re: Lee O Mac Productionz

Postby leeomac » Mar 10th, '09, 10:16

lol i havent done any writing for some time now, used to some quite alot back in the day like.
But fair enuf i agree that it was pretty shit lol
Does anyone actually wanna challenge me so i can get some writing again and then you will see that im not as bad as you think believe me
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Postby Solace » Mar 10th, '09, 13:14

Well im pretty glad you didnt go all period on us acting like "OH YEAH I PWN YOU ALL JUST CANT ACCEPT IM BETTER HUH?" or something. lol, go challenge MC Anonymous :smoking:

You will smoke him.
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Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 10th, '09, 13:31

Solace wrote:Well im pretty glad you didnt go all period on us acting like "OH YEAH I PWN YOU ALL JUST CANT ACCEPT IM BETTER HUH?" or something. lol, go challenge MC Anonymous :smoking:

You will smoke him.


hahahahhaha, solace , that made my day
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Postby leeomac » Mar 10th, '09, 16:36

haha ok then guys i can see your taking the piss again here, ok seriously i will spend some time on my next rap and hopefully you guys will start taking me seriously perhaps a? :smoking:
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Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 10th, '09, 17:29

leeomac wrote:haha ok then guys i can see your taking the piss again here, ok seriously i will spend some time on my next rap and hopefully you guys will start taking me seriously perhaps a? :smoking:


no man we're joking with ya ,,, i hope you get better ,, welcome to the forum :y:
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Postby leeomac » Mar 10th, '09, 17:36

Slim Zaddy wrote:
leeomac wrote:haha ok then guys i can see your taking the piss again here, ok seriously i will spend some time on my next rap and hopefully you guys will start taking me seriously perhaps a? :smoking:


no man we're joking with ya ,,, i hope you get better ,, welcome to the forum :y:


lol thanks mate my first welcome to the site haha
I will get better dont worry... just give me time atleast i tried a haha
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Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 10th, '09, 17:39

leeomac wrote:
Slim Zaddy wrote:
leeomac wrote:haha ok then guys i can see your taking the piss again here, ok seriously i will spend some time on my next rap and hopefully you guys will start taking me seriously perhaps a? :smoking:


no man we're joking with ya ,,, i hope you get better ,, welcome to the forum :y:


lol thanks mate my first welcome to the site haha
I will get better dont worry... just give me time atleast i tried a haha


anytime bro :worship: , yeah keep trying , post on the creative writing section and we will feed ya out .
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Postby leeomac » Mar 10th, '09, 17:43

no man we're joking with ya ,,, i hope you get better ,, welcome to the forum :y:[/quote]

lol thanks mate my first welcome to the site haha
I will get better dont worry... just give me time atleast i tried a haha[/quote]

anytime bro :worship: , yeah keep trying , post on the creative writing section and we will feed ya out .[/quote]

Haha you mean slag it off haha
Nah when i next do one i gna try and surprise a few people on here lol
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Re: Lee O Mac Productionz

Postby neversnooze » Mar 11th, '09, 17:08

this was miserably done :y: you have done an excellent job at sucking :worship:


if i had to rate this , 1/10, you had basic vocab. everything else was off multies and flow.

i hope to see better from you :sweating:
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