Inverted

[gutawafang]

Sunny day and it rains cats and dogs
Meows and barks, I got facts that fog
Rhymes that don't, eloping out of zone
Whines and moans, dope and nouns unknown
Ride on cars and I drive on bikes
On boats I fly and on planes I ride
Call me loose when my pants so tight
I wear so high, I don't care, you're mine
It's a guy in bikini, and a girl on girl
Up-sized martini, that's why I'm in my own world
Leah, Alisa, Rachel, Enovie
Oh dear, it's a sable melody
Oh man, no man, it's still snowmen in white
Pro men, go man, I love women alright
I play this song like I say it's long
I pray it's gone, my love for you, sing along

It snows in summer, what happened to the drummer
I don't need intervals, what a fucking bummer
And it rains on Christmas, sun's up to tan you
Fish or Cliff Hanger, we don't understand you
Love or hate, it's worth it I said
And at this alarming rate, there be no charming traits
Cuz I wanna fuck and reduce my weight
Work out but won't work out cuz I eat you instead
It doesn't count cuz it's been a dozen accounts
Describe me: clown, I make you laugh and rock your town
My love for you once again it knows no bounds
I look down, it's too deep, it shows no ground
You may feel what I say or ignore it
Don't read my blog cuz I'm gonna pour it
Go ahead and tore it, my rhymes on paper that's so boring
There's still more feelings I'm storing, and soon I'll be warring

THANKS!

[Emadyville]

Some parts of this has really creative wording which was impressive. But the syllable difference in lines made parts of this very hard to read flow wise, and some parts I thought had words there just cause they rhymed. I enjoyed this tho good work

[gutawafang]

Some parts of this has really creative wording which was impressive. But the syllable difference in lines made parts of this very hard to read flow wise, and some parts I thought had words there just cause they rhymed. I enjoyed this tho good work

Arigato. I'll feed more of yours next time.

[Slim Zaddy]

yeah you had some good lines out there , it don't flow perfectly but that can be fixed, i like the sense of humor in your piece, you had some clever lines too , lyrically it was simple but good. it's was a good drop actually , keep it up

[gutawafang]

Thanks Zaddy. Appreciate it.

[neversnooze]

comparing this with your first piece you wrote here, you now put more thought into your pieces. this was creatively well done. short and sweet and right on point.

[gutawafang]

comparing this with your first piece you wrote here, you now put more thought into your pieces. this was creatively well done. short and sweet and right on point.

Arigato. Thank you so much for feeding man!!!