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The way may b difficult

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The way may b difficult

Postby Purple23Haze » Mar 24th, '09, 23:32

The way may be difficult at times
simple as rhymes, pimples that's white
But mister I... will always be there
Yea I'm round no way am I square...
in vision it's bright see the light
Walk towards it, it's so important...
I be thee original subliminal criminal
Got you paranoid just a little
playin with you mind like a fiddle
Give it a giggle you fizzle I sizzle
why does snoop dogg need an umbrella
Fo Drizzle look wiener snitchel
I got the initial official clip full
In my pistol thinkin wishful
Thinkin wrist slit slow
Might as well commit the sinful
Live in purgatory this is for glory
my story shit give me more weed
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Re: The way may b difficult

Postby Ka0t1c » Mar 25th, '09, 00:23

...umm, i think u need less weed :whistle:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: The way may b difficult

Postby Solace » Mar 25th, '09, 01:01

You may have been writing for over 10 years but that was weak for someone writing for 10 days. Seen much better from you before.
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