3 Stages of Death

[MC Anonymous]

When I awoke, I spoke of the ancient terrors within
spittin' the truth, yet nobody around wanted to listen
I then spoke of the evils, the horrors, the demons inside
though nobody cared, nobody gave my preachin' a ride
the room span, I coughed, the spit then turned to blood
blood slipped into the oil, the combination burned the rug
people scattered, I was alone, burning inside my soul
I guess that's what you get when your only bride's a coal
The fires came closer, my eyes became older
before the pain hit I was already smothered in smolder...
I awoke, encaged with intangible chains
muzzle wrapped around my mouth kept my mandible tame
I saw a man, headless, blood leaking out with drips
the closer he gets, the closer I'm about to trip
silently pacing, body demented as it violently shaked
I saw flesh tormented and at that time,
my eyes and knees quaked
I screamed in despair, then I felt a hurried tap on my back
I heard a faint voice, it was seeping through the cracks
I feel the man's body heat, It's wrapping around my neck
then the voice boomed, just like the sound of techs....
I awoke again, I look around my surroundings
shaking with tears in my eyes, my heart still pounding
I hear someone talking to me, yet I can't respond
my mind chant's a song, yet I can't sing along
I feel the tapping, the temple knocking in my mind
yet for some reason, my mind isn't talking with my spine
I'm lost, I can't move, I can't feel you there
I'm awake in life, and only in dark I'm aware
objects materialize, I see my wrists slashed
blood dripping down, walls around me bashed
I look behind me, to see who was trying to bring me back
nothing, I am an angel but it is the wings I lack....

[mcZu]

Nice way of describing those 3 stages, nice way of putting together words. Flow was a bit hard to grasp, but you probably wrote it to a beat, so I give you the benefit of the doubt on that one. I enjoyed readnig it.

[Solace]

That shit was intense as you said. I flowed to it fine actually. Shit was insane man 10/10.