So sound quality improve's tho' talent doesn't,
So who's the main culprit who can't cut it,
When it comes to creating an inputting some-thing,
into producing their own music instrumental then ?
three quarter's of the industry probably,
see artists are like gambler's their just in it for makin money,
unlike that eminem's infinte no one spits that lyrically,
or they just don't try to put more effort in,
cause they know what they put out will be sellin,
not thinkin they should puttin final touches on it,
to improve it no they just cudn't give a s**t !.......
just something quick for my 1st one, feedback plz any pointer's on improvement would be appreciated

draft 2 :
Sometimes a just wonder what the f**k happened,
to the industry, it's turned into comedy, but no'one's laughin,
and nothin's happening, but there will be when em come's back,
watch him eat em up, an lil wayne turn wack,
oop's lil wayne is wack, how the f**k could a forget that,
watch em relapse on these b**t**d's,
then we can relax an put this wackness past us,
(just try again but a very quick 1 lol)