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A slow ride to death

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A slow ride to death

Postby yamahiney16 » Apr 12th, '09, 02:56

Death is a slow ride,
once ur on ur way,
theres no turnin back,
so pick up the slack,
and walk ur ass to the track,
dont look back,
dont hold back,
give it all you've got,
till uve reached the spot,
to pull out ur gun to cock,
and point it to the bullshits dock,
where any moment ur gonna get socked,
docked in the face,
yet it feels like uve been wasted with mace,
so point that gun and pull that trigger,
keep pullin to make that hole bigger,
forget bein a sinner,
allow urself to be deaths dinner,
and let it welcome ur ass to be a winner
i may be short, but im smart. The only thing ppl must know about me is: I'm always right, so get used to it
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Re: A slow ride to death

Postby Solace » Apr 12th, '09, 03:05

Your obviously just beginning; here

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=26&t=3377

I didnt use it myself so I cant say it really helps but it looks good :y:
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Re: A slow ride to death

Postby BuzzZ » Apr 12th, '09, 23:07

so point that gun and pull that trigger,
keep pullin to make that hole bigger,

^^^^^ i like that bit ^^^^^^^
no offence but i dint kinda understand the rest

do you fancey a battle ?
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