one more piece, peep if possible

[Boston]

well i been slacking writing lately so im tryna get back in and record soon again but i need HONEST feed back, i usually feed mad people but i been busy tryna get shit together with my life.. but it wud be call if u can feed this..ill get back 2 yall..



im back to have some fun again, sound system thundering/
fans got they hands up like i got a gun to em/
its like such a rush to em, the fans are bum rushin him/
who the fuck is t-murph? the fans had enough of him/
i mean damn when im swingin through, should i even try it dude?/
your just a singing dude, a trial by choir dude/
yup your just a reject;
you wana swim wit the sharks, but bitch your just to scared to get your knees wet/
beat you with a brief sweat, see through like your t's wet/
you suck so much dick you walk around with your knees bent/
come on kid try that, ill just wind back/
might snap, and leave your other eye in a eye patch/

[Solace]

I'm a pretty average writer so it might seem shit to you but that's some gold to me haha. Good shit dude Funny ass punches.

[Boston]

thanks,, i really appreciate it

[BuzzZ]

honest answer,,,
yup very good but i dint understand some of it, i carnt get the flow at the start, but towards the end i can get the ryhem in my head and start to rap it

[mcZu]

I had no problem with the flow; I liked it actually, it had that sprakling up beat flow. Lyrical it's average, had some nice punches; nothing special though. Concidering the fact that you haven't been writing alott these days, it's not that bad, though I have seen/heard better from you.