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Postby mcZu » Apr 13th, '09, 18:24

No problem; I’m a thesis for Einstein’s physics crossed with Caesar
Problems get solved; I revolve around brain seizures
Expand beyond deeper; my mind is the opposite of cheaper
I have more then enough thoughts; gifted in counting like an accounting reaper
Murder enemies with mathematical features, insane parallel fever
Installed in a ‘paramedic chest kit shout’ flow; I’m eager
To go over heads like eagles, deserted when I land with an eagle
A desert one to be precise when I claim to be legal, in fact;
I never shot someone; though don’t tempt my cerebral cortex
Feasible rap with a beastial act when I grace paper with an ink dap
Let the words sink in that, and flow the drained sharpness like a wet axe
I said that; and I’ll set rap to an extend beyond earth dwelling facts
Until I coexist with coefficient hip hop quotient, sickened in sicker raps
So I thicken my vivid rap with rhymes listed to kill instrumentals mad;
And I further the hip hop essence with my pens presence when I jot a sentence
Its pure sense and essential, as in pure hip hop back from the credentials…

Feedback appreciated.
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Re: No Problem

Postby cityfan31 » Apr 13th, '09, 20:30

usually when i read people's 'verses' on here they are shit cos they just get clumsy. I thought this was really good yo!!!
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Re: No Problem

Postby Noeezy » Apr 14th, '09, 08:48

still workin out the flow but can tell thats dope shit bro
try recording that over a old school beat if u can
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Re: No Problem

Postby mcZu » Apr 14th, '09, 14:45

MusicPimp wrote:still workin out the flow but can tell thats dope shit bro
try recording that over a old school beat if u can


Yeah the flow is a tricky one; and I had an old-school flow in mind while writing :y:
Thanks for checking man, appreciate it.

cityfan31 wrote:usually when i read people's 'verses' on here they are shit cos they just get clumsy. I thought this was really good yo!!!


Thanks man, appreciate you checking it out :y:
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