freestlye(snippet)

[Spyder]

this was sumin i wrote off the top of my head in my study hall in school, i think if u guys like it alright ill pursue into makin it a song for my album. but remmeber justa freestlye now and its very short
almost flow it like eminems love me

my knees weak as I seep beneath the streets in defeat
your next move is key, you cant do it as soothin as me
its movin to see, you choosin to be, such as loser as he
your crusin for a brusin and your losing the fee.
I have to get out of this mother fuckin place man
win the race and, comeback runnin like im chasin a van.
my vans got me trippin, just like a brother in jail man
concealed in this box but i always deliver like the mailman
lil wayne make it rain, but i fuckin make it hail man,
you think you can measure up, step on the scale then

feedback appreciated

[Solace]

Good stuff man, like how you worked on multies in that freestyle

[Spyder]

thanks man

[Spyder]

thanks man

[BuzzZ]

my knees weak as I seep beneath the streets in defeat
your next move is key, you cant do it as soothin as me
its movin to see, you choosin to be, such as loser as he
your crusin for a brusin and your losing the fee.

i really like this part,, if you did this in freestyle then you could possiably be the next eminem, id by your album if this is whats init

[Spyder]

wow thanks man idk bout that hahah, but yea i actually extended that in to a song that im putin on my album because it got so good feedback. its not gonna be out for a while but my single will be on here shortly

Vicious Assault ft MC Anonymous (not the one that is on here already)