In Need Of Chorus

[Fa-Q]

I need a chorus...I can write many many verses but its hard for me to write choruses
Background Info on song--I read a story a couple years back about this kid a girl said she liked but she ended up just saying no and turned him down and he went home and killed himself

SOOO...here is the song

I’ve always wanted to paint these walls
Phones off the hook I doubt it receives calls
Till after each one of my knees falls
The last thing I’ll remember is that one joke girl
The last thing I’ll see is the gun smoke swirl
I’m looking down the barrel to say I’ve seen my doom
All my belongings are together with a cleaned room
But I know there will be one stain of blood
I put a tarp down to try and contain the flood
Maybe my coffin will be visible when the dirt becomes rainy mud
My tomb is a hospital
Call an ambulance as soon as possible
It wont matter I’ll die a groom alone
My spouse this grey tombstone
This morning my final sunrise shined
My pupils adjust as each tried and find
Jokes on me now my eyes are blind




The Hallways cleared
Which I always feared
She’s the Slut I’m the Dunce
For some reason at that moment all the lockers shut at once
My ears perk up at the sound of her voice
But how could I tell her when she’s around other boys
But now she was alone with her other dimwit friends
If she only knew I didn’t care about her split ends
Even though carbons free
She made it hard to breathe
I’m doodling her name in a heart
Oh no here comes a flame and a spark
But as soon as she brought it she
Doused it with her rain and the dark
I boarded her plane and she taught me how to fly
My friend my enemy who shot me out the sky
So ask yourself when did you cross the line
Cause your sanity cost me mine



My light bulb burned out
I wonder how low I would have turned out
Doctor, Lawyer, Would I have gotten any taller
Would I have to save a life?
And after 20 years of marriage would I have craved my wife
But my times up no more hours till my doom
All these flowers fill my tomb
Now my spirit towers the moon
And it reminisces that your words were a new poison found
Now your tears on my gravesite just moisten the ground
Next time you break a heart
Find your cold one and take it apart
And see your rotting from the inside out
I hope your tears never dry out
And when people ask what you cried about
You’ll say that note and every haunting lyric
Was him in a form of a taunting spirit
So just put on that fake smile
But after you read this I hope it takes a while

PLEASE DONT TAKE MY LYRICS

[mceddie]

HOOK

It's where we go when we no longer can hold on
It's where we go when the end has come, and we gone
It's where we go when we no longer have any fight
So tonight, i hold my breath, and my tongue i bite
it's where we go