Homicide Hotline

[Requiem]

Chorus

Thinkin bout murder? Dial the Homicide Hotline,
if u wanna kill somebody, Homicide Hotline.
U got a beef to settle? Homicide Hotline.
or if u attacked by boredom, Homicide Hotline!

Verse 1

Ever wanted a venture to kill, for a rush or a thrill,
angry bout bills? here's how to experience the feel:
pick up the phone, wait for the tone,
then dial our number, forget the area code,
the call will go through, now here's what u do,
ur gonna hear a voice that sounds like Apu,
ask him "what's good?",
he'll connect u with someone straight from the hood.
then tell him ur story, whether its revenge or for personal glory,
he'll set you right up, and pick u up the next morning,
then it'll be time, for the ride of your life,
at least someone will die before the end of the night.

Chorus

Verse 2

Did you survive, is your target alive?
Either way we're here 9 to 5,
but if u would like to call back again,
feel free to join the group that we're in,
we're always looking for more recruits,
u can kill some more, and u get a free suit.
and ur not restricted, by telephones limits,
and u won't have to pay ten dollars a minute.
not to mention long distance, and tax additions,
but if u don't thats fine, ur loss not mine.
Still call today, we're having a sale.
we'll make sure to delay that bill in ur mail.

Chorus

Verse 3
(to be continued)

[Solace]

I have to agree with Coleon here; cept Harry Potter is a lot more gangsta than Ice. I never like it when you talk gangsta; or say anything that you don't do or experience...And either way that piece was quite weak. Like it was weak considering the lack of multies/shitty multies you chose; the subject matter (homicide hotline, wtf?) and it was just pretty crappy. Sorry dude. 4/10.

[Requiem]

^ fine fine, i was just tryin to be light hearted over here muse about a funny subject, but why fucken bother

[gutawafang]

I can't flow to it, Ice.

But yeah, it's good to experiment, I think. You certainly is good man.
thing is, i've seen better works from you man.

[Ice_Scarred]

Not my type of piece cuzz. The subject matter was creative, but just the overall delivery just didn't do it for me. Rhyme structure was ok, a bit off a bit. Couldn't really find the flow to the song. We all know your creativity is in the right place, but the subject matter could definitely be changed. Looking back at some of your old shit, this isn't on the level of most of your pieces. Don't worry about it though, keep droppin!