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Dynamite

Postby mcZu » Apr 28th, '09, 19:31

Just 18 bars with no real concept, just some bragging/dissing shit on Just Blaze's Dynomite instrumental. Feedback appreciated as always.

Instrumental: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eUaGbQ_sypw
Don’t bother fighting me; you’re no match
I lit the fire underneath Wu-ever like meth.
Turn the floor red-man; so you’re an X-man.
Not a mutant, rather dead due to this lyrical ruger.
Physically super; genetically uber, you end up being a loser.
So take a knife and finish it; just cut your loses.
Be on say; a spike bed like... Hov-is;
I just brought this, dynamite dynasty in this fight.
Lyrically I top even Himalaya heights;
Turn your life scene cold, like Alaska sights.
Bomb freight when I spit; explosive delivery, ight
Supposedly endlessly; was sup, with your anatomy?
Fanatically, rearranging your genetic code;
Generate a combustion flow; pound your head so,
You equal US dough, you S as in small though;
I am extra large as Chino; I’ll scar your face like al Pacino.
My bars love to face hate; swine flu sickness when I grace,
An instrumental with rhymes fly as the Mil Mi-28…
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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