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this is my hook

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this is my hook

Postby mceddie » May 11th, '09, 07:54

well i dont know if i should really be posting this cause this is the work in progress lyrics im writing for
the lifeanddeath contest, but oh well.

verse

dont even sleep anymore, fearin im a wake up
in a world where instead of spittin, rappers still spittin up
since all they rap about is the fame and the bitches
priding themselves on how they livin life in the riches
see i gotta different kind of pride, one that comes from inside
and i dont need the money and the cars to hide behind
if all it takes is a dream, then im light years ahead
cause growin up dreams were the only thing i was fed

well if a dog needs a bone,sorry, i dont give a fuck
and if a crackhead needs some blow, sorry, i dont suck
i was raised to stand on my own, never listen to the dickhead
trust only me, nah, not even me on second thought, instead
push away your friends, and keep your enemies close
when they hear my rhymes they convulse, like they havin an overdose
and yeah dont trust your self, but still believe in who you are
cause truth be told that's all you really need to make it far

hook

see this here, this is my hook?
caught you off gaurd,sliced you when you didnt look
i just caused an earthquake, the ground just shook
and one insane verse was all it really took

opinions?remember, work in progress :D
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Re: this is my hook

Postby voice23 » May 11th, '09, 07:56

its cool man
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Re: this is my hook

Postby mceddie » May 11th, '09, 08:13

voice23 wrote:its cool man


thanks man
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