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Postby Spyder » May 11th, '09, 18:02

When I hit this chronic this shit gets demonic
it's un thought of, the way that I spit ebonics
Any thoughts I jot it got hooked on phonics,
and became this homicidal robotic methodical
monster when I slaughter the lot of them.
Suprisingly no remorse for the agonising torture
pro abortion, the kids are no longer important.
Transport the weed unleash the beast on your doorstep
I don't run, I walk fast with a purpose.
Azmatic with sparatic hazardous ass spasms
passin gas faster than you can gasp it.
These suicidal tendencies is whats ending me
representing the art of being complexing
interesting, cuz lunesta is what I be ingesting.
grabbed the chainsaw to make my brain gone
missed, and left my veins hanging off.
cut up your brother left him in the basement
police runnin round town we got another jason.
this is an invasion, this shits hot as cajun
tie you up wit 6 limbs, use the other 2 to beat your face in.
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Re: random shit

Postby Steve Spag » May 11th, '09, 18:07

Pretty hot, but it's too Eminemish in my opinion.
Looks like a verse that didn't make it on Relapse.
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Re: random shit

Postby Spyder » May 11th, '09, 18:38

haha yea that was kinda what i was goin for a lil bit but glad u like it :y:
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