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So Sorry(PLEASE READ)

Postby Spyder » May 17th, '09, 01:52

sorry bout the structure, but really i didnt give a fuck on this piece!


Intro: Hello my name is TJ Bouchard, this isnt spyder, this isnt the insomniac
I guess I have been under a microscope in that I write like the great MC Anonymous
Well… heres why I guess


So im walkin down around town confused and lost
Now whos the boss, my raps are masterpieces, or so I thought.
Sign up for a site that will give me a chance at the mic
My times tonight im in the center of the spotlight.
So I kick it, just plain rip it, but it turns out its just alright.
I get feedback sayin my shits wack and infact
I need a new hobby cuz this shit aint rap.
So im scopin out the talent and see a great,
Challenge him to a battle that was my first mistake.
He beat me peace of cake, but he imed me that night
And said that was tight, but use multies and I was like,
What you talkin bout MC Anonymous I don’t understand
He took me under his wing gave me his hand.
Told me to rhyme this word with that word, go on
I said man I cant, he says but I can, I say show off.
He says now hold on, I know you can now just try
So I spit sick shit, and now I can rhyme.
Im lettin loose on anyone who wants some, winnin battles,
Whatever they say don’t matter cuz im comin back at em.
But then no ones lookin at my shit even though it hot
60 views no comments I guess they forgot to jot,
their thoughts, on my rap because their hands were busy with the applaud
but come to find out that’s not the case at all
I was to similar to someone with whom I was involved.

HOOK – man im just tryin to find my place on here
This stage made fear, but its no longer here.
I can spit rhymes with the best im bein honest
All thanks to my main man MC Anonymous

So I talk to my boy he seems kinda edgy,
I ask whats up u don’t seem too friendly.
“Dude your bitin my style its pissin me off,
I shoula left u as u were, shouldn’t of got involved.
I git a new persona u get one too…ironic
I talk bout bein insane and next U go psychotic.
Im a magician with the mic and now u wit lyrics?
Man this shits fimilar, is this an echo im hearin?”
MC is not like that man I fuckin promise
I guess im the real one bein anonymous.
I get everything you just said, really I do,
But everything I learned it was from you
I just rap this way because its how I feel true.
I don’t read most of ur stuff, ur raps, ur poems.
Not sayin its bad im just busy with my own.
So anything I have duplicated is accidental
Because I don’t wanna ask u if u like the rap I sent u
Like ur my mother fuckin parentals.
So sorry man im just tryin to make my raps known
But if it loses ur respect that craps gone.

HOOK – man im just tryin to find my place on here
This stage made fear, but its no longer here.
I can spit rhymes with the best im bein honest
All thanks to my main man MC Anonymous.


Outro: im sorry that I write like anon… yes he taught me about rap man
But I honestly was writin my own shit now even readin his stuff
Because I was busy with my own.
So I hope you all can look past that we have similar styles
And start feedin my stuff again sayin what u though of my rhymes,
Rather than sayin it was “erm, influenced, to be nice”
I get it, but that was all me man not a copy cat


MC ANONYMOUS THANK YOU AND IM SORRY
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Re: So Sorry(PLEASE READ)

Postby Solace » May 17th, '09, 02:05

That was really dope dude, understood a lot of it obviously since he's talked to me 'bout it a lot. I skimmed through verse 1 to be honest, but I really read over the 2nd one cause I really liked it. :y:
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Re: So Sorry(PLEASE READ)

Postby Spyder » May 17th, '09, 02:14

thanks man, i hope u git everything i said and hope that u can feed my stuff again because i know u and others are readin em, but my style is my style and im not tryin to copy no one so even im interested in my future stuff lol but w.e

PS feed my stuff lol
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Re: So Sorry(PLEASE READ)

Postby Ice_Scarred » May 17th, '09, 02:56

That was dope. Definitely. Reminds me of what Asher did with "As I Em". Nice material man, I hope 2 read more from you.
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