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Vicious Assault(REVISED NO AUDIO)

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Vicious Assault(REVISED NO AUDIO)

Postby Spyder » May 11th, '09, 18:05

SPYDER
Vicious and intense killin defenseless infants
Arguments senseless imprisoned for skippin my sentence.
My knives and swords killin wives and whores
‘Til they cant cry no more, Just try for the door
with forks in your eyes and fire in your shorts.
Ridiculous, remainin inconspicuous
Till I find out where the fuck the babysitter is.
Mentally retarded sentimentally departed
You sent for me to get started, continentally charted.
Remember me partner? Well I got my best friend
To end it, and the rest is, history when the led gets,
Into the bloodstream, flood dreams and ur left dead.
Words shake like an earthquake my sermons make
You think about lyrics longer than an eternal birth’ll take.
Clinically insane but you cant mimic me today
Ain’t close in anyway, crawlin around my ass like a guinea pig.
Got my battle scars from gravel and tar
I’m not travelin far, so reveal yourself now wherever u are.

Hook (X2) – This is a vicious assault
You wont be missin at all
Fists ina ball, killin all of ya dawgs

MC ANONYMOUS
Ripped up with gripped cuffs, tip stuff and spit snuff
You slipped up, tough, I'll rough up your girls cunt
field goal, punt guns, hunt nuns with demonic puns
hypnotic stuns, chronic spun my melodic stunts
I spit frequencies, hearing me is lethal see? Feeble G's
get evil deeds released on they cranium, you seeing me
you fearing me, hearing these killing sprees, to kill MC's
spill my G's, to Fill My E's, then dope up until I see
the skill in me, reveal and see, I steal all these, XTC
next to me, my text is free, rest your knees, spinal seeds
my vinyl bleeds, no final needs, my idol greed is ending me
bending trees, spending 'G's, lending these Vietnamese
a bombing CD, so they can learn about lyrical dreams
my mystical being seems to be seeing seamless streams
genius beams expel from thought, Intel is sought
Gentle your not, spit till I fill ya bill with blood clots.

SPYDER
Murderous and I’m sure of it
Curin kids with cancer and returnin it
My antics leave you frantic, now can it
Dick gigantic have you stripped in the Atlantic
Thoughts pedantic, takin lyrics u shoulda ran wit.
Unfit to run wit, crushed nuts like banana splits,
Leave you titty fuckin one tit, now that’s somethin.
Spontaneous combustion while I’m bum rushin
My being to self-destruction. Violently cum pumpin,
So hard its fuckin bum bustin, fuckin cousins.
I watch porn like a playboy entrepreneur
Rob stores, and chase kids on lawn mowers.
I’ll stab and rape you while I grab n’ tape you
Call your dad to date you, hang up
Then call back and yell, “I hate you.”
Cuz me and anon disregard age like Akon
Fuck her in the ass turner round and say “hey mom.”
These sick bastards just whipped your ass faster
Then your dad jackin it, when he quit bein a pastor.

Hook (X2) – This is a vicious assault
You wont be missin at all
Fists ina ball, killin all of ya dawgs
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Re: Vicious Assault(REVISED NO AUDIO)

Postby Ice_Scarred » May 17th, '09, 03:07

"Vicious and intense killin defenseless infants
Arguments senseless imprisoned for skippin my sentence."

Dayyuummm brah. The bars from both you and Anon were just sick. This piece needs more feedback, cause you guys really came hard with this one. Rhyme Scheme and Lines were dope. Hook could use a little more work (im actually workin on mines to. I suck at hooks, lol) to be more catchy and such, but overall dope piece.
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Re: Vicious Assault(REVISED NO AUDIO)

Postby Spyder » May 17th, '09, 03:35

thanks man glad u liked it :y:
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