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Postby D'Leh » May 21st, '09, 18:54

this is a freestyle by me, just made last night i think its suck, cuz is my first one, just to share it with you tell me what do you think....remember im from Argentina, i speak Spanish and im 17!!! haha.

Before i'll star yelling like everyone does
im gonna start out drinking just a little of buzz
cuz is the only thing to get me away from this ghosts
my girlfriend just runaway whit a couple of fucks
But i dont care, im strong as hell, and you know i cand destroy you
like 50 on Wayne.
So stop fucking with me, you dont know me , i can ride you
and fuck you like a little pony.
the story of my life, still dont know what i like, im 17 and riding a bike
tryin to star in the game tonight, watchin tv and get inpired just by Mike(jordan)
i dont know, but fuck, im like
theres a rope in my neck and its getting oh so thight
Im dyin in here locked in this wolrd full of shit
wanna a couple of dollars and just a Xanax Get
Its my first song, and I know im suck
im not doing this to get a simple buck
if you believe that really, you can suck my cock.

tell me what you think of this crap.
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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