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notoriety

Postby Ka0t1c » May 22nd, '09, 03:24

for notoriety i know anxiety can not show to society
when i flow a variety to expose what's inside of me

so i hope that i'll be free, but i'm twenty three
there is no time you'd agree, my rhymin will see

growth a higher degree than our whole site has
cuz i'm an aspirin emcee just open your eyelids

wider, pl-lease, over the horizon
this soldier will wisen realisin disguises

beneath them, there hides us from each
while lies are to cease, try and bring peace

by supplyin free speech, recognize where's the key
apply and come reach towards risin, now teach

more signs we should breach
your silence decrease, violence impeach

cuz life's meant to seek towards drivin your beak
survival's technique and strong minds stay unique
Last edited by Ka0t1c on May 22nd, '09, 15:52, edited 2 times in total.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: notoriety

Postby Fa-Q » May 22nd, '09, 04:13

hey man dope lyrics...props
but instead of having a whole bunch of rhymes right after another...let people see your real lyricism and divide the each rhyme on each line...no what im saying hey keep em coming....
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Re: notoriety

Postby Ka0t1c » May 22nd, '09, 04:18

ok, thanx
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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