Getting a Mic This Summer ...Verse 1( Story, Stays on topic)

[J Roc]

IAm

Verse 1

Lemme Tell You a Story of a boy who Was OFF-BOUNDS Who Lived In a Trailor ,In a SMALL TOWN...
Who Couldnt TALK NOUNS Who Slurred-His-Speech Till All The Words-He-Speaks Was COMPOUND
Till he had a Problem He CALLED HELP , He Let It Ring It Was JOHNS CELL..
"I Was CALLED OUT , And He's Kinda TALL NOW Bout The Height Of Some SMOG CLOUDS
His Punches Was Slow Like the LONG ROUTE I Was ALL DOUSED I Was Lucky i didn't FALL DOWN
He Finally Hit Me With a PALM POUND Then i Pulled His Whole ARM DOWN
And i Kept On Hitting Till He Was KNOCKED OUT (.."CALM DOWN!!!")"
"Brendan NOT NOW I'm On a Bus Going MACH TWELVE With the TOP DOWN
And I'm Kinda Scared Im Gonna FALL OUT , So I Can't Take This CALL NOW"
So i Hung up and waited for the COP SOUNDS They were Around the BLOCK..WOW
I was in School Cause i Hung With the WRONG CROWD Till They DROPPED OUT
And Had Their Drug's On LOCKDOWN , And Sold It For PROM GOWNS
The Rest Of My Class Was ALL CLOWN'S Making FART SOUNDS
Then I Let My GUARD DOWN And That's What Happen's In OUR TOWN


One Part I Want To Fix ... The Cop Sounds /Block Wow part ... dosen't really fit ... otherwise that's the BEST i can Do With a SONG .... lol feedback? gonna record when i get a mic this summer

[lilrossy]

nice verse man, i liked it.

[Ka0t1c]

not too bad

my fave part:

I'm On a Bus Going MACH TWELVE With the TOP DOWN
And I'm Kinda Scared Im Gonna FALL OUT , So I Can't Take This CALL NOW"
So i Hung up and waited for the COP SOUNDS They were Around the BLOCK..WOW
I was in School Cause i Hung With the WRONG CROWD Till They DROPPED OUT
And Had Their Drug's On LOCKDOWN , And Sold It For PROM GOWNS

[J Roc]

Thank's for readin guy's . Think i might make a mixtape this summer , Soooo ... Keep a hawkeye out lol .


Uppin

[Slim Zaddy]

yeah , it's nice , i always liked your multies man ,, gd job ,, flow is dope here ,, yeah record it ,, it will be sick ,, keep it up man