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The Suit of Me

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The Suit of Me

Postby MC Anonymous » May 29th, '09, 20:16

I realized sometimes...
I am as a card dealt with a perculiar suit,
a suit of black darkness, yet not a spade
or a club...just me.

Alone; created by the dealer to be so...
my tears are not so much tears,
they are liquid metaphors to remind me..

As I remember being on the hand of fate, face down
then flipped over to see the light of the world,
I recall my first second of existance..
I died then, and I am still dead now.

The rotation of reasoning
interpretations of morality
being good verses being evil...
confused me.

So I died... I died because I lost what it meant
I forgot what it was.

The innocent luxury of nonexistant tranquility
slipped away when my soul was introduced;
now.. as a warrior and a heart that pumps
not blood, but ink.. I rise once more
to reclaim my spot in the suit of humanity
to resemble the universal card of normality
and most of all...

To Be Free...
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: The Suit of Me

Postby MC Anonymous » May 30th, '09, 14:53

MC Anonymous wrote:I realized sometimes...
I am as a card dealt with a perculiar suit,
a suit of black darkness, yet not a spade
or a club...just me.

Alone; created by the dealer to be so...
my tears are not so much tears,
they are liquid metaphors to remind me..

As I remember being on the hand of fate, face down
then flipped over to see the light of the world,
I recall my first second of existance..
I died then, and I am still dead now.

The rotation of reasoning
interpretations of morality
being good verses being evil...
confused me.

So I died... I died because I lost what it meant
I forgot what it was.

The innocent luxury of nonexistant tranquility
slipped away when my soul was introduced;
now.. as a warrior and a heart that pumps
not blood, but ink.. I rise once more
to reclaim my spot in the suit of humanity
to resemble the universal card of normality
and most of all...

To Be Free...

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LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: The Suit of Me

Postby Solace » May 30th, '09, 22:19

Nice dude, my favourite part here Angel:

So I died... I died because I lost what it meant
I forgot what it was.

The innocent luxury of nonexistant tranquility
slipped away when my soul was introduced;
now.. as a warrior and a heart that pumps
not blood, but ink.. I rise once more
to reclaim my spot in the suit of humanity
to resemble the universal card of normality
and most of all...

To Be Free...


Keep it up :smoking: People just aint commenting cause most expect a rap here but your a dope poetic.
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