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MC Mic Controller

Postby MC Anonymous » May 27th, '09, 02:26

Anonymous intruder, computer and an abuser
lyrical slaughter, the author and verbal schooler
regurgitate nitrogen bombs on my palms
remain calm, while I sing a song from the psalms
I'm so nice and that's a natural fact
I'll crack ya back like XTC chemical snacks
attack with retraction of a gat on ya chest crack
if you a girl, if a guy, I'll blast ya ball sack
I'm like that, with mic rap I fight back
with punches and metaphors lined up like bike racks
pull the heat out, flee now, get hit with three rounds
put your G's down if you down, catch the rebound
pyschic rhymes split your minds with timin'
sign in, get the L spoken to you like simon
on my grind and, ready to blast your face off
made you ate all the napalm, now stay calm
cause' I saw you like I cut the top of an O
strong enough to break the hoover dam when I'm droppin' my flow
stoppin' the show like HBK, get in my way
spit a punchline at you then the letters will play
with ya cornea, you're cornier then south carolina
you try to hide, I'll just go over there and find ya
fight these nerds with fighting verbs and lightning words
make stool pigeons fly away like frightened birds
flip and get back spasms, assassins, my tracks have em
click clack magnums, blast em till they crack adam--
--apples, drink snapple pineapple flavored juices
you can't fool this, I use fists to knock hair off like budists
I "control", "alternate" flows and "delete" wackness
put a "virus" in your "harddrive" and "crash it"
tech drops on fake "desktops" smash "backgrounds"
of wannabe MC's who think they "enter" crack rounds
"wrap" you in death's grip like I spit "ether"nets"
cause you "microsoft", one water molecule leaves you wet
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: MC Mic Controller

Postby Solace » May 27th, '09, 03:34

That was dope as usual and you ended it pretty fucking awesome. Clever shit at the end. Didnt understand this line, could you clear that up a bit for me?

sign in, get the L spoken to you like simon


Other than that, flawless. Keep it up.
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Re: MC Mic Controller

Postby Ka0t1c » May 27th, '09, 03:39

definitely great wordplay, especially at the end, way to use your metaphors, i'm diggin this! :worship:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: MC Mic Controller

Postby gutawafang » May 27th, '09, 03:46

Perfect flow. Never went off at all. Lyrics as sick as usual. And the ending was impactful, you made full use of words that have two meanings.

Dope shit man. :y:
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Re: MC Mic Controller

Postby MC Anonymous » May 27th, '09, 18:50

Solace wrote:That was dope as usual and you ended it pretty fucking awesome. Clever shit at the end. Didnt understand this line, could you clear that up a bit for me?

sign in, get the L spoken to you like simon
He usually tells people they fail and makes them lose.


Other than that, flawless. Keep it up.


Thanks guys for peepin' :flower:
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Re: MC Mic Controller

Postby Solace » May 27th, '09, 21:44

MC Anonymous wrote:
Solace wrote:That was dope as usual and you ended it pretty fucking awesome. Clever shit at the end. Didnt understand this line, could you clear that up a bit for me?

sign in, get the L spoken to you like simon
He usually tells people they fail and makes them lose.


Other than that, flawless. Keep it up.


Thanks guys for peepin' :flower:

Now im in a better mindstate I realize you were talking about Cowell. I was thinking you was talking something about Simon says lol.
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Re: MC Mic Controller

Postby MC Anonymous » May 31st, '09, 15:23

Solace wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
sign in, get the L spoken to you like simon
He usually tells people they fail and makes them lose.


Other than that, flawless. Keep it up.


Thanks guys for peepin' :flower:

Now im in a better mindstate I realize you were talking about Cowell. I was thinking you was talking something about Simon says lol.[/quote]
Lmfao. :flower:
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