The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Fakers Diss

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Fakers Diss

Postby mcZu » Jun 3rd, '09, 20:33

Just a general diss to fake people, feedback appriacted.
Ya’ll imitating Terminator 3, thinking we'll see a rise of your machines
You can’t -I’ll back- me, ‘cause all of my lines are fierce like wolverine
My fist is vicious and mean, so my punchlines flow like Eden’s stream
You can’t require this skills overnight like ‘Eve,’ my flow is a relief
I was born with these skills, so most people do believe that I cheat
Don’t step up to me, ‘cause your body will be making strange moves like Tai Chi
So let the tiger crouched and the dragon hidden, using my name in vain is forbidden
They all talk about stacking paper like the dishes in a restaurant’s kitchen
Fronting about turning to your green in a fight like The Hulk?
Then best believe that the cops will be investing in some chalk
My rhymes are fly like The Fal-con, I don’t pack guns like Megatron
My speech will make you sit down like the last son of krypton
Like after ‘Sai’ you’ll be gone, so stop reaching, otherwise I’ll start flaming
Without pulling The Thing on you, my lines will make you start fading
My verbal is amazing, -fantastic for- you is plain simple for Zu’s makings
Bars that I’m spitting are a high-, not low-gun like the father of Daken
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

Follow Me!

McZu's Blog!
User avatar
mcZu
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 7297
Joined: Jun 17th, '08, 14:21
Location: Rotterdam
Gender: Male

Re: Fakers Diss

Postby lady speedstik » Jun 5th, '09, 10:17

Nice, my fav line had to be "They all talk about stacking paper like the dishes in a restaurant’s kitchen"
Image
User avatar
lady speedstik
Trailer Trash
Trailer Trash
 
Posts: 195
Joined: May 26th, '09, 22:47
Location: Cali
Gender: Female

Re: Fakers Diss

Postby mcZu » Jun 5th, '09, 14:53

Thanks for the feed :y:
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

Follow Me!

McZu's Blog!
User avatar
mcZu
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 7297
Joined: Jun 17th, '08, 14:21
Location: Rotterdam
Gender: Male

Re: Fakers Diss

Postby mcZu » Jun 5th, '09, 16:06

Thanks Maybe, definitely gonna try to fix the flow. :y:
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

Follow Me!

McZu's Blog!
User avatar
mcZu
Band Leader
Band Leader
 
Posts: 7297
Joined: Jun 17th, '08, 14:21
Location: Rotterdam
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users