It turned out this way ...

[J Roc]

Nothing special , just like doodles but with rhymes

I Think she think's it's ALL LUST
like it's NOT LOVE
the sad part is we Don't TALK MUCH
It's Like we "cut off our hands" how we "LOST TOUCH"!!! (Whoa!)
But if you 'DROP DRUGS' lemme "Pick up lines" call me DOC LOVE!!
Then i can win you back cause it's TOP STUFF
And if we get CAUGHT? UHH....
i know we can 'talk in jail' cause our "Lips..LOCKED UP"
I been Smoking These BONGS , BLUNTS During These LONG MONTHS
I used to COUGH UP My DOGS LUNGS Till they GONE NUMB
My mom alway's taught me to share if you WANT SOME
Im kidding i'll stop playing as soon as this SONG DOES

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PITY HES AWAY , SHIT Whut Happen? GIVE ME INFORMATION..Ohh!! LISTEN HES A FAGGOT
Racist he was ACTING so killa BANNED HIM i guess he's in a "STICCY SITUATION"!!!

-PunchlineChamp

[Steve Spag]

lmao, nice wordplay man. good shit, don't really know what else to say, lol.

[James R.]

You said it. Nothing really special, but it wasn't bad. Had some decent word play. How about if from now on you just bold your multies? I mean it'll still draw our attention to them since apparently we can't tell that they're there without some sort of aid, but it'll be far less obnoxious. Unless you're yelling all your rhymes in which case just stop.