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Intro lyrics to my EP

Postby Jay-19 » Jun 8th, '09, 16:04

This is the intro to "Mister Vicious" which will be dropping soon.
This track is not about the content at all, but all about the flow.
I tried a totally different flow than I've been doing before, and it turned out nice.
And I thought I'd share the lyrics with you guys, even though they have no meaning at all besides being all fucked up.

And it's featuring another rapper from Sweden, don't have his lyrics yet though.

takes animated men to say that handgrenades are bad for Jay
they ran away when I was about to hit them all with laminate
not old school, not heavy, damn it man I'm featherweight
is my music bad or great I only do what my daddy hate
and mom despise, I call it rhymes, fuck it, I wanna write
I don't want be part of life, I say to myself I wanna die
kill myself, change my mind, fuck that little brain of mine
I just try to stay alive, all of a sudden I crave some rice
I don't even like rice, my mic's feeling likewise
my mic doesn't want to rec me, so he's saying "bye bye"
my mic does not pick up all the words I might like
I just flip, and police come, flashing with their bright lights
I don't have a clue what this song is really all about
subject matter's shattered, fuck it man I'm balling out
calling out, any rapper who just wants a piece of me
no matter what the reason be, Nineteen is a mean emcee
the weed in me has gotten me, looking at the scenery
with fascination, bastards hating, fuck it, I need to pee
so I drop it all just like napalm bombs over Vietnam
Vietcong, it's on, I could fight all week long
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Re: Intro lyrics to my EP

Postby James R. » Jun 8th, '09, 16:10

It wasn't about shit at all and it was pretty fuckin random, but you told me that much. past that I think it's pretty hot honestly. The flow was tight as shit just reading it over in my head. The rhyming was cool although it got pretty basic in some areas. Multies were on point and helped hold the flow together a lot. I liked it man. put that shit on a tight beat and talk your shit and you got a nice intro.
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Re: Intro lyrics to my EP

Postby Jay-19 » Jun 8th, '09, 16:11

Thanks James.

I'm satisfied with the outcome of it all.
So just wait, you gonna hear some crazy flow... :shifty:
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Re: Intro lyrics to my EP

Postby James R. » Jun 8th, '09, 16:41

Hey man I'm lookin forward to it.
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Re: Intro lyrics to my EP

Postby Steve Spag » Jun 8th, '09, 17:01

Pretty nice drop man. I got the flow for it instantly, and it sounds like it'll be pretty dope. Lyrics were cool, seemed kinda basic at points, but hey, we all know that works, haha. Good stuff man, can't wait to hear the audio!
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Re: Intro lyrics to my EP

Postby Jay-19 » Jun 8th, '09, 18:59

Thanks Steve!

And yeah, keeping it simple from time to time is good. It doesn't have to be all complex all the time. :smoking:
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Re: Intro lyrics to my EP

Postby Arabian Shady » Jun 9th, '09, 08:41

flow was definatley hot man, lol opening line was dope, liked that alot :y:
lookin forward to Mr.vicious now :8)
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Re: Intro lyrics to my EP

Postby Jay-19 » Jun 9th, '09, 13:45

Thank you A S :8)
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