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3 Versus

Postby Spyder » Jun 9th, '09, 00:31

please read them all, and they dont have anything to do with eachother :whistle:

Sweet Dreams
Im a narcoleptic insomniac stayin awake in my dreams
What the fuck did I just say, nothin is the way it seems
Im being picked up by green beings in flying machines
Receiving free disease bleeding, blood filled wit STDs.
Shaking at the knees, I feel different than I usually feel
Im new to the deal, this shits to weird for you to be real.
Am I dreamin, theres things moving all around me now
Bound to the ground, lost waitin until im finally found.
Now I have awoken, chokin on blood words unspoken,
No notice to my vocals their cracked battered and broken.
Frozen in fear the moment is here no components are clear
Just chosen to p’own it own it and control it this year.
Its over im done no soldier has won this eternal battle of life
Now straddle the knife, fall back overshadowed with light.

Rhyme Retarded
Substantial credentials, existential killin parentals
Makin fillins in dentals, exceptional, expect the bull,
Expect the full, incredible, on another level in the ghetto.
My sarcasm is rippin you apart discardin you in fractions
Divide you in half and get mad cuz I couldnt do the math,
Lay you down flat on a bed of tacks hit you wit a giraffe
Catch my back blast, laugh, and put your lips on my ass.
Now examine this famine ive been plannin to create
Leavin you wit nuttin but a ham sandwhich and a steak
Have you vanish in plain, day while im standin and wait,
Man isnt it great, took flavor flavs clock and turned it to 8.
Held a gun to your head and told you“hang onto my eggo
Waited at a stop sign until it said go, then left in a winnebago.
Im the sickest dude to live on the moon, sue me soon
Cuz im blowin up this rap and usin it as a balloon.

Just For Starters
I spit as if my saliva was acid to melt you alive
Get out of line im fuckin takin a belt to your hide.
Between you and I, I only do rap to make myself heard
Put subtitles on my chin so you fuckin hear every word.
Your not the first to observe, im crazier than Michael Myers
Gave you a boat, sent you to a deserted island with extra tires.
Im mentality retarded, yes this shit wasn’t never ment to be started
Yes your girl hates TV but at least her legs like the Departed.
So give me that mic it’s a delight to steal what isnt mine
Jumped over the Grand Canyon got up and told you im fine.
This “New Breed of Beast” is comin to plug your orifices
Bitches get hit so hard they go through “Metamorphoses.”
Solace doesn’t even need to rap to split your asses in half
In fact the he’ll get you a new one cuz your old one had a crack.
Shout out to James R, cuz the flames are, back and hot
Its nice to no a 5 Star General could get you back on top.
“Anonymous” a Vietnam youtube man tearin down Hulu
shits crazier than you tryin to figure out a rap from Mc Zulu.
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Re: 3 Versus

Postby James R. » Jun 9th, '09, 01:05

I liked all 3 of them. I probably liked the 1st one least. Nothing wrong with it. Rhyming got simple at spots, but it didn't take away from anything. And I can't choose between the 2nd and 3rd verse although I did get a nice little shouty. All were solid. I think I liked the later ones because the flow was a little stiffer in them I think. I dunno man. They were all on point, so I'll just leave it at a good job and have a good night.
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Re: 3 Versus

Postby Spyder » Jun 9th, '09, 01:30

haha thanks dude :y:
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Re: 3 Versus

Postby Young Luc » Jun 9th, '09, 02:08

sick verses, i think the 2nd is best. great stuff
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Re: 3 Versus

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jun 10th, '09, 21:45

good shit man ,, all of them are dope ,, i liked the 2nd as well , it's fire ,, keep it up dude :y:
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Re: 3 Versus

Postby Spyder » Jun 11th, '09, 02:09

thanks guys :D
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