We Ain't Comin' Ta Grips

[lilrossy]

Its ro$$y bitch, my rhymes are so dirty, where's da cleaners,
ima modern maverick, a pottymouth, lady soveriegn wit a penis,
tie britany to a chair while i french kiss nd seduce her sis,
squeeze in my fist til her pussy lips is around my wrist,
give it a twist, til blood starts pourin out like piss,
tear her pussy ta bits, make her remember me every time she sits,
shit, i got problems dat fuckin dr phil couldn't fix,
but when it comes to hip hop, gota whole fuckin bag of tricks,
i spit like this cuz all u rappers give me da shits,
im sick of ya pricks, every piece ya spit i give it da deep six,
jus keep spitin like this while my temper jus clicks,
til i put my foot up ur ass, nd turn deez nikes into brown kicks,
keep playin round wit sticks, create a fire dat will burn ya ta bits,
on my shoulder i gota whole fuckin packet of chips,
jus take one of my tapes, study it, nd get sum tips,
til den im packin heat on both hips, cuz we ain't comin ta grips.

[James R.]

That made me lol a few times. Not bad man. The flow was decent, rhyming got pretty basic at spots, but the humor was on point. Pretty enjoyable read. Thank you for not making it a whole song because I don't think this kinda thing could stretch without getting boring. Anyways solid shit bro.

[lilrossy]

Thanks alot man, appreciate the feedbak.

[Slim Zaddy]

i liked ,, as james said it's weak at soem points , but still i enjoyed it a lot dude ,, i liked your rhymes ,, and it flowed welll, good job bro ,, keep it up

[lilrossy]

Good lookin out, Im glad u liked it.