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Logic?

Postby mcZu » Jun 11th, '09, 17:14

-Logic?-

Lyrical physician diagnose through verbal incisions
Physical lyricism a paradigm for lyrical visions
Imprisoned in them so called epistemology cases
Methodology phases face some diabolical races
Against entomology numerous poisonous inflations
Indicating benign hindsight verbal death angels
Coming to guillotine the guilty soaked with kerosene
And lit a lit fused with a fuse sparked by a mean
Produced angle of depth deduced from an extreme
Point of view located in quantum physical areas
Metaphorical appendix pixilated in Pico sizes hysteria
Picture that magnified by a lens in a different galaxy
Beg to differ and I’ll differentiate the gallons and degrees
Your limbs become stiffer and your throat soar like shit
Rigor mortis regulates the regular rate of the term stiff
Helium magnesium oxygen magnetized magma handles
With lava filled candles pushed against your ankles
So waterboarding seems childplay if you monitor
The weather changes in my lyrical mono predator
Whether; torturing or making you sorry ass forfeiting
I stay puzzling with words until you stop fo’ fo’ aiming
Supposedly aiming ‘cause opposites pose and stay in
Vice versa mode ‘till a modus idem ditto’s those
Reflecting reflections of a fata morgana rose
Embedded in a heavenly defined mirage or miracle
Stings each time you hell bound with rage or get physical
Yet vasculitis vacuum your veins with minor cellulites
In vain trying to be invading the brain with cells UV lighted
Neurologists surprised due to the anti-bodies priced
Tax free yet they hex the fees on aqua like a walking Christ
I’m a talking lyrical device yet emotional blessed
Rational hexed to be too logic thinking about some ends
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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Re: Logic?

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 12th, '09, 05:38

alotta big ass words...good shit though
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Re: Logic?

Postby James R. » Jun 12th, '09, 13:54

Very complex. Probably a little too complex for my personal likings, but mechanically it was solid. Everything was on point for real, just too Grad School you know what I mean lol. Wouldn't make a good audio, but it's a good text drop. Good job homie.
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Re: Logic?

Postby Spyder » Jun 12th, '09, 20:22

that was tight man fo' real, so fuckin complicated haha, i feel like you should teach me english rather than my school teachers lol
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Re: Logic?

Postby mcZu » Jun 12th, '09, 20:33

Thanks for checking guys, appreciate it. I know its a bit over the top, but I had to clear my head, so I couldn't help my self writing a 32 way too complex verse lol.
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